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- Mon Feb 24, 2014 4:53 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
- Replies: 351
- Views: 213092
Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Anniversary Oneshot Added 2/24]
I'm very rarely a fan of sad stories, and unfortunately this was no exception. There's nothing wrong with the one-shot itself, really, just not something I'm a fan of. And I'm going to assume that this is either a bad end epilogue or just a what-would-happen-of-they-broke-up scenario. Either way, no...
- Sun Feb 23, 2014 11:55 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 956991
Re: Yamaku Book Club
Holy shit. I got the series for Christmas and I'm a little over half way through the third book.Sea wrote: I read the entire game of thrones series in 4 days, go summer!
- Sun Feb 23, 2014 11:49 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Best Case Scenario
- Replies: 10
- Views: 5233
Re: Best Case Scenario
Count me interested. I also have epilepsy, though nowhere near as serious. I like the reference to Naomi, though I'm guessing he's not dating her. That would be awkward.
- Sun Feb 23, 2014 5:05 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Complete: Hisao X OC 25/2/14
- Replies: 15
- Views: 6743
Re: Complete
Not bad overall. As I've said before, I'm not a big fan of OCs, I usually end up disliking them more often than not, but they can certainly work if done well. Not much to go on with her yet, but you have my interest.
- Sun Feb 23, 2014 11:50 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
- Replies: 864
- Views: 436234
Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2/23/2014}
Is she accidentally that gorgeous?! That made me laugh. Anyways, glad to see this updated. It's one of my favorite ongoing stories. As for the chapter itself, I liked it. Glad to see Iwanako is, at least partially, regaining the mental state she had before Emi collided with her. Hopefully a positiv...
- Sun Feb 23, 2014 10:57 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 956991
Re: Yamaku Book Club
Maybe the reason Miki routes never get completed is because she doesn't seem to have any kind of really complex anxieties or issues and it never feels organic to try and give her any. She seems more like an "action" love interest, the kind of girl Hisao would fall in love with as they wer...
- Thu Feb 20, 2014 10:17 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Bad Hanako (Pt5, 20/2)
- Replies: 46
- Views: 21305
Re: Bad Hanako (Pt5, 20/2)
I've actually already got four predictions of how this is going to end. All of them end with Hanako dead, and three of them end with Lilly being her last victim (they're variations on how Hanako dies). I'm hoping it's not the fourth, because that would be a cheap way to end the story. I think the b...
- Thu Feb 20, 2014 9:28 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Bad Hanako (Pt5, 20/2)
- Replies: 46
- Views: 21305
Re: Bad Hanako (Pt5, 20/2)
It will be interesting to see who dies next. Emi was an accident, Shizune was getting too close and Suzu was a witness(and thus the one I felt the worst for). I for what reason the next one will die for(I'm assuming she isn't done killing yet).
- Tue Feb 18, 2014 7:25 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
- Replies: 351
- Views: 213092
Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 2/18]
Nice to see this is still active. As for the chapter itself, I loved the banter between Hisao and Kagami, and the names Mei and Kagami would call each other. I also liked the reference to Rin's exhibit. I wonder who or what pushed her to do it without Hisao's influence?
- Tue Feb 18, 2014 4:53 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
- Replies: 585
- Views: 522775
Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 1/18)
Terrific work so far. Just finished Scene 7... Just one thing I wanted to comment on: Lily seems like a bit of a passive-agressive bitch in this scene. This might be justified, seeing as how Hisao didn't defend her during the argument with Shizune, but it struck me as a little odd, given her normal...
- Sun Feb 16, 2014 3:01 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Bad Hanako (Pt5, 20/2)
- Replies: 46
- Views: 21305
Re: Bad Hanako (Pt4, 10/2)
I feel like Hanako will have a much harder time keeping this one a secret, especially if Shizune told anyone where she was going, and the fact that she actually has to hide the body now. Should be interesting to see where it goes from here.
- Fri Feb 14, 2014 4:35 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Winter Update!
- Replies: 198
- Views: 97538
Re: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Valentine's Day Up
As short as it was, I actually enjoyed more than most of your other specials. It was straight and to the point, and gave Kenji a backstory(as tragic as it was, it paves the way for his, shall we say, "unique" personality during the game). Overall, I really liked it.
- Wed Feb 12, 2014 11:23 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Rin: Clearer Than Words
- Replies: 13
- Views: 10001
Re: Rin: Clearer Than Words
I had already heard of the term 'checking out', so that didn't really stand out to me.
- Tue Feb 11, 2014 10:39 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Overdrive (Lilly)
- Replies: 29
- Views: 19785
Re: Overdrive (Lilly)
In addition to all the comments on chapter 4, I don't really like how Hisao kisses Lilly while still dating Emi. That automatically makes him pretty unlikable. I was actually enjoying the story quite a bit until that point.
- Mon Feb 10, 2014 5:21 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Graduation Day [Shizune/Misha]
- Replies: 8
- Views: 4361
Re: Graduation Day [Shizune/Misha]
I'd read it. I love stuff like that. Especially since the person doing "Hanako's story" isn't going to do the other routes.Kitsune Spirit wrote: Actually thought about that myself... also thought about doing the Emi route from Emi's pov (or at least part of it).