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by AntonSlavik020
Wed Jun 04, 2014 11:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 957615

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Can you open your heart?)

Haven't read it yet(Rika smoking and her general attitude early on annoyed me greatly), but I'll give it another chance. Who knows, maybe it will surprise me.
by AntonSlavik020
Mon Jun 02, 2014 9:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A few short stories
Replies: 37
Views: 25087

Re: A few short stories

That was probably the best one yet, though it helped that it wasn't a song. I'm familiar with the game "papers please", so I found the crossover interesting, as simple as it was. While it's kinda sad that Lilly left Japan permanently, Hisao ending up with Hanako and the general amusement o...
by AntonSlavik020
Mon Jun 02, 2014 7:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
Replies: 237
Views: 128586

Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout

That was a fun chapter. Glad to see this updated, this is one of my favorite ongoing stories. Anyways, loved the banter. And I think Hisao definitely will regret issuing Shizune that kind of challenge(not that I think she would do anything cruel). I don't see him coming out on top very often. :)
by AntonSlavik020
Sat May 31, 2014 7:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A few short stories
Replies: 37
Views: 25087

Re: A few short stories

I'm not familiar with the song this is based off of and I'm not usually a fan of fics based off of songs. Besides that, it was interesting, I guess. Also, why was Hisao buried in Inverness? I understand he dated Lilly, but still. If this is her good ending, then she stayed in Japan with him.
by AntonSlavik020
Thu May 29, 2014 4:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 67648

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series

I'm also glad to see her return. She was probably my favorite OC in the series. Interested in seeing where this is going to go.
by AntonSlavik020
Mon May 26, 2014 3:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Little More Like Yamaku
Replies: 12
Views: 5002

Re: A Little More Like Yamaku

I thought the same thing about the nailgun to the eyes. They almost certainly would have penetrated her brain and killed her. I also have a hard time believing that one saw could cut both arms off. With that said, I thought it was O.K. It was a unique premise, but nothing I'd read a second time.
by AntonSlavik020
Mon May 26, 2014 1:08 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Stop The Clock (Meiko)
Replies: 16
Views: 14473

Re: Stop The Clock (Meiko)

That was really sweet. And the h-scene was really well done, so good job there. You were able to succeed in making it seem like a real relationship despite the age difference, which is nice considering I usually have a hard time taking a Hisao-Meiko pairing seriously. So overall, good job.
by AntonSlavik020
Sun May 25, 2014 10:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Birthday Wish (Saki/Rika) [Complete]
Replies: 35
Views: 23186

Re: A Birthday Wish (Saki/Rika) [Updated 5/25]

Really enjoyed this chapter. I liked the conversation where Saki is trying to find a guy that Rika likes. Not too much else I can think of to say I didn't say after the first chapter, so good work so far.
by AntonSlavik020
Sun May 25, 2014 1:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 957615

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Closure)

I personally didn't like it, but I want to stress that it wasn't because it was done poorly. I didn't like it because it just made me feel depressed. The concept of a major character's death is just not one I can get into, fair or not. I didn't even finish it, and from the sounds of things, it just ...
by AntonSlavik020
Wed May 21, 2014 7:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 194200

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 10/05/2014)

My point precisely :) Also, not entirely sure why you're dreading the H-scene, but glad to see you look forward to it as well xD. Because it was awkward as hell. And I meant that it was true more for Lilly THAN Hanako, not and. While Hisao's fitness level isn't improved in Hanako's route, it doesn'...
by AntonSlavik020
Tue May 20, 2014 10:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Birthday Wish (Saki/Rika) [Complete]
Replies: 35
Views: 23186

Re: A Birthday Wish (Saki/Rika)

Great story. Unlike some people, I'm very rarely a Rika fan(smoking is a major turn off for me, but that's another discussion entirely) and I didn't like Saki in the one route she has so far, but I liked them in this one so kudos for that. I think a large part of the reason why is because you concen...
by AntonSlavik020
Tue May 20, 2014 10:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 957615

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: The Fireman)

That was absolutely fantastic. The first part kinda reminded me of a story about a paramedic who saved Emi in her car crash, but I digress. I'm aware of the pastebin, though I hadn't read this story yet. I can't really think of too much else to say, so I'll leave that to the people who are better at...
by AntonSlavik020
Wed May 14, 2014 2:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 957615

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Apologies to Harlan Ellis

I'm also gonna sit this one out, for the same reason listed above.
by AntonSlavik020
Mon May 12, 2014 8:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bugger It, Oneshot Thread (Morse Update 10/4/16)
Replies: 161
Views: 81919

Re: Bugger It, I'll Make This A Oneshot Thread (Updated 12/5

That was great. I think my favorite line might have been "I have no idea what he said, but it was the funniest thing I've heard in a completely incomprehensible language." I had to look up who the guy was(I'm not a soccer fan), but that's besides the point. And I could be wrong, but I thin...
by AntonSlavik020
Mon May 12, 2014 7:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 957615

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: After the Dream: Rin's St

I'm not usually a fan of crack fics, but there are some that are entertaining. I say why not.