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by AntonSlavik020
Tue Aug 19, 2014 5:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 436551

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2014-2-23}

Well this is one of my favorite on-going stories on the site, so I'm just popping in to say I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Take as long as you need. I'll take a very well written(not that that's a problem with you) chapter that takes a long time over something unready.
by AntonSlavik020
Tue Aug 19, 2014 5:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Birthday Wish (Saki/Rika) [Complete]
Replies: 35
Views: 23197

Re: A Birthday Wish (Saki/Rika) [Complete]

Really nice friendship fic. Nice happy ending with some feels in the middle. Overall I enjoyed well enough.
by AntonSlavik020
Tue Aug 19, 2014 5:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 194346

Re: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)

Great job on this story. I didn't get quite as emotional during the confession scene as I have in the past, but that's probably just because I've experienced it so many times.
by AntonSlavik020
Wed Jul 02, 2014 7:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 26th, 2020)
Replies: 217
Views: 162183

Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Jul 2nd)

Great to see this back. This is probably my favorite Miki route, especially since it's from her perspective. That's a bonus. Anyways, as other people have said, you don't need to follow something from another fic. Not too much to say about the chapter itself, other then I'm looking forward to the &q...
by AntonSlavik020
Mon Jun 30, 2014 10:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 52220

Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 6/30

I'm not big at all on bondage, though I understand some of the practical reasons they did it( :wink: ) that way. Keeping the noise down and all that. Besides that, it was well done. As for the regular chapter, I enjoyed it. Not too much to say on it, besides Hideaki's(could never remember how to spe...
by AntonSlavik020
Tue Jun 24, 2014 5:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A few short stories
Replies: 37
Views: 25099

Re: A few short stories

I didn't like this one at all. The instant it was revealed that Hisao cheated on Lilly with Hanako, I lost all interest. Cheating is something that, to me, is completely unforgivable.
by AntonSlavik020
Tue Jun 24, 2014 5:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
Replies: 124
Views: 60346

Re: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 6/20]

Really enjoyed this chapter, especially Yuuto's internal dialog. That was a great as always. The Misha conversation was fun too. Looking forward to the next chapter.
by AntonSlavik020
Tue Jun 24, 2014 4:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Disheveled [Ch. 3, 9/18] (undergoing revisions)
Replies: 50
Views: 26909

Re: Disheveled [Ch. 3, 6/22]

Well this chapter was certainly up and down. Loved the descriptions given to the phone and the dialog between Naomi and Nat, but the math talk and the talk with Mutuo at the end were pretty hard to read.
by AntonSlavik020
Tue Jun 24, 2014 12:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 194346

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 20/06/2014)

I just read the chapter now, so I also missed the reference to Misha/Miki. Anyways, it was decent. I was a bit surprised how into it you had Hanako being(I didn't think she finished, but she certainly could have), but I've read worse H-scenes. I would call this chapter just average, overall, though ...
by AntonSlavik020
Sat Jun 14, 2014 8:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Roasted Cinnamon
Replies: 11
Views: 5180

Re: Roasted Cinnamon

Great start. I'm interested in seeing how the story with the old man and his son connects with the larger story. You have my interest.
by AntonSlavik020
Sat Jun 14, 2014 8:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
Replies: 237
Views: 128635

Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout

Again, can't really say anything I didn't already say, since your pretty much continuing to do really well what you were already doing. The couple of things I'll say is I liked the Jiggy reference(and reiterating Hisao's continued dislike for the man) and the mention of Shizune's mother. If you deci...
by AntonSlavik020
Sat Jun 07, 2014 8:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Perseverance - (OC) Dead Fic
Replies: 30
Views: 13429

Re: Perseverance - (OC) Dead Fic

Sorry to hear about your mom. You have my condolences, for whatever they're worth.
by AntonSlavik020
Fri Jun 06, 2014 11:19 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 67689

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 6/5)

In my experience the rapid change in elevation hurts no matter what, but that might just be my ears. Well, I've flown a few times myself, but I never experienced any more pain than I did when driving a car in the mountains - nor have I ever seen another passenger doubled over in pain. That's why ai...
by AntonSlavik020
Fri Jun 06, 2014 12:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 67689

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 6/5)

It just had to be Michigan, didn't it?(I'm an OSU fan :) ) Anyways, nice update. It's cool to see Malik and David in the story. Malik was one of my favorite characters from the game. Not much to say, since it's still mostly buildup, so I'll just say I'm looking forward to where this is going.
by AntonSlavik020
Wed Jun 04, 2014 5:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A few short stories
Replies: 37
Views: 25099

Re: A few short stories

Yeah, after the last one, this was definitely not as good. So far the only one I liked was the "drunk Lilly" one.