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- Tue Aug 19, 2014 5:45 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
- Replies: 864
- Views: 436551
Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2014-2-23}
Well this is one of my favorite on-going stories on the site, so I'm just popping in to say I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Take as long as you need. I'll take a very well written(not that that's a problem with you) chapter that takes a long time over something unready.
- Tue Aug 19, 2014 5:33 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Birthday Wish (Saki/Rika) [Complete]
- Replies: 35
- Views: 23197
Re: A Birthday Wish (Saki/Rika) [Complete]
Really nice friendship fic. Nice happy ending with some feels in the middle. Overall I enjoyed well enough.
- Tue Aug 19, 2014 5:18 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
- Replies: 378
- Views: 194346
Re: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Great job on this story. I didn't get quite as emotional during the confession scene as I have in the past, but that's probably just because I've experienced it so many times.
- Wed Jul 02, 2014 7:34 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 26th, 2020)
- Replies: 217
- Views: 162183
Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Jul 2nd)
Great to see this back. This is probably my favorite Miki route, especially since it's from her perspective. That's a bonus. Anyways, as other people have said, you don't need to follow something from another fic. Not too much to say about the chapter itself, other then I'm looking forward to the &q...
- Mon Jun 30, 2014 10:05 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
- Replies: 112
- Views: 52220
Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 6/30
I'm not big at all on bondage, though I understand some of the practical reasons they did it( :wink: ) that way. Keeping the noise down and all that. Besides that, it was well done. As for the regular chapter, I enjoyed it. Not too much to say on it, besides Hideaki's(could never remember how to spe...
- Tue Jun 24, 2014 5:45 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A few short stories
- Replies: 37
- Views: 25099
Re: A few short stories
I didn't like this one at all. The instant it was revealed that Hisao cheated on Lilly with Hanako, I lost all interest. Cheating is something that, to me, is completely unforgivable.
- Tue Jun 24, 2014 5:27 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
- Replies: 124
- Views: 60346
Re: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 6/20]
Really enjoyed this chapter, especially Yuuto's internal dialog. That was a great as always. The Misha conversation was fun too. Looking forward to the next chapter.
- Tue Jun 24, 2014 4:36 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Disheveled [Ch. 3, 9/18] (undergoing revisions)
- Replies: 50
- Views: 26909
Re: Disheveled [Ch. 3, 6/22]
Well this chapter was certainly up and down. Loved the descriptions given to the phone and the dialog between Naomi and Nat, but the math talk and the talk with Mutuo at the end were pretty hard to read.
- Tue Jun 24, 2014 12:21 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
- Replies: 378
- Views: 194346
Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 20/06/2014)
I just read the chapter now, so I also missed the reference to Misha/Miki. Anyways, it was decent. I was a bit surprised how into it you had Hanako being(I didn't think she finished, but she certainly could have), but I've read worse H-scenes. I would call this chapter just average, overall, though ...
- Sat Jun 14, 2014 8:57 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Roasted Cinnamon
- Replies: 11
- Views: 5180
Re: Roasted Cinnamon
Great start. I'm interested in seeing how the story with the old man and his son connects with the larger story. You have my interest.
- Sat Jun 14, 2014 8:23 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
- Replies: 237
- Views: 128635
Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout
Again, can't really say anything I didn't already say, since your pretty much continuing to do really well what you were already doing. The couple of things I'll say is I liked the Jiggy reference(and reiterating Hisao's continued dislike for the man) and the mention of Shizune's mother. If you deci...
- Sat Jun 07, 2014 8:43 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Perseverance - (OC) Dead Fic
- Replies: 30
- Views: 13429
Re: Perseverance - (OC) Dead Fic
Sorry to hear about your mom. You have my condolences, for whatever they're worth.
- Fri Jun 06, 2014 11:19 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
- Replies: 159
- Views: 67689
Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 6/5)
In my experience the rapid change in elevation hurts no matter what, but that might just be my ears. Well, I've flown a few times myself, but I never experienced any more pain than I did when driving a car in the mountains - nor have I ever seen another passenger doubled over in pain. That's why ai...
- Fri Jun 06, 2014 12:02 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
- Replies: 159
- Views: 67689
Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 6/5)
It just had to be Michigan, didn't it?(I'm an OSU fan
) Anyways, nice update. It's cool to see Malik and David in the story. Malik was one of my favorite characters from the game. Not much to say, since it's still mostly buildup, so I'll just say I'm looking forward to where this is going.
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- Wed Jun 04, 2014 5:00 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A few short stories
- Replies: 37
- Views: 25099
Re: A few short stories
Yeah, after the last one, this was definitely not as good. So far the only one I liked was the "drunk Lilly" one.