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Not much to say, except love the last two lines.

I'll say this much, it's different. I didn't mind the change in perspective changes too much. I think it can work in a prologue sort of thing. Just don't keep doing it for every chapter, as it would get old fast.

Nice chapter. You're definitely improving with each update.

And now I am finally caught up with the stories. That said, fantastic everything. I can't really say anything someone else hasn't already, but I really enjoyed this fic. It didn't really hold my attention early, which is why I stopped reading at one point before continuing again, but once it picked ...

Craftyatom wrote:This was pretty fun to read, once I got past the beginning, where I had a few moments thinking that this would be a suicide fic. I'm glad it wasn't.

Too be honest, that was my second guess once it become a little more ominous. I've been surprised by fics like this before.

That was a nice story. My first thought was she was psyching herself up to confess to Hisao, but it became clear early on that that wan't the case. Overall it was an entertaining story. A little tamer than some of your other stuff, but I think that was the point.

Seems like a decent enough story, though Emi certainly isn't my favorite. I missed the redacted chapter 2 since I took a multi-month break from the site, but from the sounds of things I wouldn't have enjoyed it anyways.

I can't really say anything that hasn't already been said better than I can say, so I'll just say that this was a very good story. As other people said, the idea of a maternal Rin is very interesting and rarely explored. I can't think of anything wrong with it, it's just very well done.

Well it's certainly an interesting pairing. And while it does feel a LITTLE rushed, it's not a major issue or anything. I'll be keeping an eye on this one.

Decent start, though it's going to catch my attention simply by being a Miki route. Looking forward to more.

After my probably half year absence from the site it took me a bit to remember which story this was. Once I did, I was glad to see an update to it. It's a fun story with a main character who is becoming much more likable. Can't wait for the festival.

I love slice of life stories, and this one was sweet.

I know you said everything should go fine with the surgery, but good luck anyways.

You have my interest. Any story not from Hisao's or an OC's perspective gains some bonus points. Plus, I like both Naomi and Hanako, so I'm looking forward to where this is going.

Something tells me "Detective Miki Muira" won't let Hisao's evasiveness of the confession question go forever. Also, I expected Miki's ice cream flavor of choice to be something more unique than chocolate chip cookie dough, like maybe one of the strange names Ben and Jerrie's gives their i...