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Another great chapter. Kinda cheesy at points, but still good. Really looking forward to Hisao meeting her older brother. I know I said I don't like him, but in this case it should be fun. Also, I think "I suddenly feel as though a squadron of butterflies have dive-bombed my stomach." was ...

That was sweet, and it's completely believable that this conversation could happen. Not really much to say about it other than that.

Haven't been to the book club for a very long time, and I haven't checked back in since I came back to the site, so I missed whatever spawned this. As for the story itself, I really liked it. Got sorta depressed when I realized it followed Lilly's bad ending(It's REALLY hard for me to like a fic tha...

Loved it, especially the scene at the end. It changed it from a good chapter to a great one. Also, I keep getting confused whenever you say "canteen". I thought at first that Fuji was storing food in her drink container at first, and wasn't entirely sure why Ayane was handing her money. Yo...

CloudGrain mentioned the problems in the story better than I ever could, so I won't add to them. It does seem like you put effort into it, but it does need work. That said, I did like how the main character is related to Nurse. You can't have too much Nurse.

I have to say, Akihiro is not a person I would get along with in real life. I'm not big on constant swearing and i HATE smoking.

Also, I don't really blame Ayane for not apologizing. In her place, I think I would have fired back too. He was being an asshole.

Really enjoyed this chapter. I liked how flustered Ayane got when Hisao played the gentleman card. Looking forward to the studding session.

Not to much to say about this one. Liked the scene in Suzu's bedroom with Seiki reading Suzu to sleep, and the Suzu Polo game was fun.

Glad to see Miki's reasoning changing to simply not wanting to engender her friendship with Hisao, which is a much more reasonable excuse for not starting a relationship yet. Besides that, not much to say about this one.

Really enjoyed it. Probably the soonest any route has reached the first kiss(even though he didn't have time to reciprocate, there's only one way a kiss on the lips can be interpreted). Also,

TheTealeaf wrote:Why haven’t I shut my door yet?

Not sure.

I loved that line.

Wasn't as interesting as the first one since it's not a behind-the-scenes kinda thing as much, but it was well done for what it was. Do you plan an doing more scenes?

Seems solid so far. Really like the humor. I was wondering myself how accurate this depiction of amnesia is, but apparently there really is a type where you can suddenly loose memories that quickly. And is weird I forgot about Suzu too? Probably because I was caught up in the story.

Really enjoyed this last chapter. I'm glad Ayane is making an effort to open up somewhat. I understand it will take time, but as long as she makes progress in that regard, I'll be happy. I think I've said enough about that though in my last post. Anyways, I loved her reaction when "Alien" ...

In Japan the teachers change classes, not the students, so her friend would be in all her classes. Anyways, the only real complaint I have is more of a personnel preference of mine. Characters that say things like(I'm not sure I can ever love again) annoy me. I also don't like it when character's re...

Seems pretty enjoyable so far. Not a huge fan of using words like "otaku"(I'm not an anime fan so I had to look that up). Hmmm should I use something more universal then? Simply refer to her hobby as nerdy or geeky? I would appreciate it. Kinda takes me out of the flow of the story when I...