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I'd have to side with Hisao on this one, books are better. And whenever there is a book based on a movie, or vise-versa, the book is almost always better. That said, Mina has a good taste in movies. I don't watch many animated movies, but any movie made by Miyazaki worth a watch. And I always take m...

Really enjoyed this. Love how swiftly their mother was put down, though I'm sure she'll be back with a vengeance. People like her don't give up easy. And DAMN what a finish. You really know how to leave a cliffhanger, don't you?

I didn't mean for you to delete your story. Sure, I wasn't huge on the style, as I said, but I would have kept reading. I still enjoyed the characters.

That was nice. Really liked the bonding between them. I can see where Mina is coming from. I love a good rain storm when you're inside. I also liked the fact that Hisao seems to be talking to more of his classmates, and not just Shizune and Misha. Also, I have no idea why, but when you said his clas...

Loved the conversation with Emi. It seems like it's the kick in the pants Hisao needed. Also, Well then lets get outta here. Nurse was probably listening in on our little soap opera this whole time." I turn around to face the Nurse's office, just now noticing the slight crack in between the doo...

I prefer to use proper English, which says to use third person perspective in creative writing. In any case, this has nothing to do with the story. It does, in a way. You've got a story that flows back and forth in somewhat staccato turns — i.e., a he-said-she-said pattern. This gives the sensation...

Good start. I tend to like these two, so a story like this is definitely something I can get behind. That said, the third-person perspective took some getting used to. Maybe partially because most fics on this site are first-person, but I just tend to prefer first-person perspectives in general. Jus...

There's a lot of new characters being added. Seeing as how they're all new, I kinda hope the perspective doesn't switch between four different people. I suppose I can get used to it if you do that, but with all new characters, it'd be better if the number was lower than that. That's my opinion anywa...

Very enjoyable chapter. I liked the awkwardness, and, like Mirage said, how you're involving most of the other girls as well. Looks like this is where we start to take some steps towards them dating. The only thing I noticed that was a little odd was Its Mina. Meet up @ side gate in 10? Isn't her sa...

For some reason I had forgotten about Keiko. She seems...excitable so far. Also, it's nice to see Hisao make up with the girls, even if they won't have a major impact on the story. Really liked the talk he had with Shizune and Misha, as short as it was. Also also, "unlike yesterday my stomach d...

I'm really liking Minako so far. She seems fun, though if Hisao's not careful his heart could end up acting up. He's taken a few risks already(like falling out of a tree would almost certainly cause a problem). Looking forward to the festival!

I agree with Mirage. The fact that this took place post Kenji ending was one of it's main selling points. I understand you have to move on from that eventually, though. Looking forward to the update!

That was nice. I have a sweet spot for fluffy stories, so I enjoyed this. Predictable, yes, but fun.

Very enjoyable. Love creepy things in general, and this was well done. I initially thought Yuuko was the one from the game, but besides that initial confusion, well done.

Overall I liked it, but I'm not a fan of Hisao's self-hating. It's one of my least favorite personality types. Though that's likely a product of when you decided to have the break-off point be, after he's already failed with each girl. I actually kinda skimmed through each part like that as it's jus...