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by AntonSlavik020
Tue Nov 18, 2014 8:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story [Updated 10/26/15]
Replies: 157
Views: 89119

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story

bubeez wrote:Team Water? Who would even be on that team?!
Me, for one. Water is almost all I drink(I don't even drink coffee in the morning).
by AntonSlavik020
Mon Nov 17, 2014 11:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story [Updated 10/26/15]
Replies: 157
Views: 89119

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story

Well, what can I say? Hisao likes coffee too. Oh, I am also an avid fan of Star Wars! :D I would never try and portray religion in that way. Trust me. I'm sorry if anything was offensive. I just wanted to make Seiki's current position clear, and how it could change as the story goes along. Who know...
by AntonSlavik020
Mon Nov 17, 2014 11:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mutou Gets Fired
Replies: 7
Views: 6851

Re: Mutou Gets Fired

Was he being fired from Yamaku, or somewhere he worked prior to his employment there? If it's Yamaku being defunded, you might want to go into that a bit more - plus, I mean, a school doesn't just fold up on short notice. They need to finish the year etc. Judging by the fact that this takes place b...
by AntonSlavik020
Mon Nov 17, 2014 10:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story [Updated 10/26/15]
Replies: 157
Views: 89119

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story

That was fun. I had an internal fangasm at Hanako reading Star Wars. I'm a huge Star Wars fan, and I've read a lot of the books. Also, Seiki seems to be developing feelings for Hisao pretty fast. I don't necessarily have an issue with it(I've said before that liking someone day one is completely rea...
by AntonSlavik020
Fri Nov 14, 2014 6:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Eight Up]
Replies: 70
Views: 44172

Re: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Six Up]

Yeah, like other people have said, she only has herself to blame. I really hope she realizes that soon, because I don't personally enjoy bitterness all that much. The fact that she's mad at Hisao over something that's mostly her fault kinda annoys me. I understand this stuff has it's place, but the ...
by AntonSlavik020
Thu Nov 13, 2014 12:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Eight Up]
Replies: 70
Views: 44172

Re: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Five Up]

Jesus Christ what a chapter. Talk about a tone-shift. My hands were actually shaking when I started typing I had so much tension. And that has to be one of the best cliffhangers I have read in a long while.(Right up there with Emi giving Iwanako a heart attack in Mean Time to Breakdown)
by AntonSlavik020
Wed Nov 12, 2014 6:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Vision
Replies: 68
Views: 38480

Re: Vision

Zarys wrote:It's Lilly or Hanako route ?
Judging by the fact that he woke up naked in Hanako's room, I'd say a Hanako route. Unless Lilly is sharing. :D
by AntonSlavik020
Tue Nov 11, 2014 10:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Vision
Replies: 68
Views: 38480

Re: Vision

Loved it. Like it was already said, one of the more beautifully written pieces in some time. The only thing I'm wondering is when this takes place. It sounds like they're still at Yamaku, but if its a full year after Hisao's first heart attack, shouldn't they have graduated by now? If memory serves...
by AntonSlavik020
Tue Nov 11, 2014 9:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Vision
Replies: 68
Views: 38480

Re: Vision

Loved it. Like it was already said, one of the more beautifully written pieces in some time. The only thing I'm wondering is when this takes place. It sounds like they're still at Yamaku, but if its a full year after Hisao's first heart attack, shouldn't they have graduated by now? If memory serves ...
by AntonSlavik020
Tue Nov 11, 2014 10:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
Replies: 124
Views: 61134

Re: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 6/20]

AnImpatientUser wrote:question, are we allowed to bump/necro a thread?
Yes, though it tends to be discouraged.
by AntonSlavik020
Mon Nov 10, 2014 11:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story [Updated 10/26/15]
Replies: 157
Views: 89119

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story

Nice. Looking forward to it.
by AntonSlavik020
Mon Nov 10, 2014 10:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 216733

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 5/8]

Don't worry about it, I've waited over 6 months or more for some stories to get an update, so your's isn't that unusual. Looking forward to the continuation of your story, even if it may be a while.
by AntonSlavik020
Mon Nov 10, 2014 10:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Eight Up]
Replies: 70
Views: 44172

Re: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Four Up]

I'm like the previous posters, I'm pretty sure I have diubeetus too. :) Seriously though, that was really sweet. Pretty much everything from when they arrived at the spot on was great. And I'm not surprised their first kiss was Mina stealing it. Thats just like her. I'm sure Hisao was able to recipr...
by AntonSlavik020
Sun Nov 09, 2014 8:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Eight Up]
Replies: 70
Views: 44172

Re: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Three Up]

Loved that last scene. Very well written and emotional. Hisao revealing his heart condition is always a scene I look forward to in a story, and this one didn't disappoint. Now that he's told Mina what his condition is, I wonder when her's is going to be revealed or manifest itself like Hisao's did. ...
by AntonSlavik020
Sun Nov 09, 2014 6:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fitting In (A NxN fic) [Chapter 3 complete!][18/1/15]
Replies: 29
Views: 14096

Re: Fitting In (Working Title)

Wow, that girl was a bitch. Nevermind her attitude, but she could have actually INJURED Natsume. For all she knew, Nat had a crutch because she has weak bones, and that collision would have resulted in an injury. Heck, even with arthritis I'm sure it hurt worse than it normally would. Since Nat know...