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- Sun Mar 22, 2015 11:17 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Last Article
- Replies: 12
- Views: 6209
Re: The Last Article
That was fun. My only real comment on the main story is I would HATE it if a girl asked me out in front of all those people. I would seriously consider just walking right back out of the classroom. Also, is epilepsy really something people are made fun of for? Granted I don't live in Japan, and my e...
- Sat Mar 21, 2015 7:14 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
- Replies: 206
- Views: 149132
Re: Miki: Fragments (Updated 21/3/15)
Looks like we have another friend for Miki. And if I were to guess, there was an alcohol related car accident. The evidence points pretty strongly that direction.
- Fri Mar 20, 2015 11:02 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Lost in Translation - A Shizune Prequel
- Replies: 49
- Views: 23027
Re: Lost in Translation - A Shizune Prequel
I like what you have so far. Wasn't a fan of Shizune's extreme pessimism for most of the story, though it made sense. Looking forward to more. A comment! yaaaaaaay *Ahem*. Keep in mind that !prequel Shizune =/= !KS Shizune. There will be more than a few differences before she gets to where we see h...
- Fri Mar 20, 2015 8:11 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Lost in Translation - A Shizune Prequel
- Replies: 49
- Views: 23027
Re: Lost in Translation - A Shizune Prequel
I like what you have so far. Wasn't a fan of Shizune's extreme pessimism for most of the story, though it made sense. Looking forward to more.
- Fri Mar 20, 2015 7:36 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Cowlick and Claws!
- Replies: 34
- Views: 12899
Re: Cowlick and Claws!
I love how flabbergasted Isamu is at how successful Hisao is at talking to Lilly and Hanako, especially since Hisao doesn't think he's actually doing anything special. Very funny stuff.
Just keep doing what you're doing, it's clearly working.
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- Mon Mar 16, 2015 10:01 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
- Replies: 206
- Views: 149132
Re: Miki One-shots (Updated 16/3/15)
Another nice chapter. Ryouta seems like a fun character. That said, I'm not sure one-shot is really accurate anymore.
- Mon Mar 16, 2015 8:39 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Cowlick and Claws!
- Replies: 34
- Views: 12899
Re: The Bro-fic
Hmmm. Promising. Isamu seems like a fun character. Don't have too much to say about it yet, but I like what you have so far.
- Sun Mar 15, 2015 8:53 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Gravity: A Molly Pseudo- Pseudo Route. Updated as of 11/03/2019
- Replies: 115
- Views: 93326
Re: Gravity-Molly pseudo route [03/15/15]
Agree with everything Mirage said. Really liked Taro, and Suzu's teasing was pretty funny too. Also, there was this... He’s got messy brown hair and the bit sticking up at the front immediately irritates me. I almost laughed out loud at this. My personal favorite line. Also also, hurray for a Molly ...
- Sun Mar 15, 2015 8:16 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Puppet Show (Rewrite in progress, explanation posted.)
- Replies: 118
- Views: 44579
Re: Puppet Show [OC Story] [New Frontpage+Chapter Eleven!]
Loved this chapter. And that fanart you just posted is hilarious.
- Wed Mar 11, 2015 9:53 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
- Replies: 206
- Views: 149132
Re: Miki One-shots
I liked it. Not to much to comment on that hasn't already been said, though I did like the grandfather. And yeah, most fanfics don't bother describing what the already known characters look like(like Dipper and Mabel in Gravity Falls fanfics. God I love that show).
- Fri Feb 27, 2015 11:53 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
- Replies: 124
- Views: 60268
Re: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
Nice to see Miki and Yuuto start to treat each other better. And we know from Hanako's bad ending that its the cute, quiet ones that can be the most terrifying when they get angry, maybe because it's so unexpected.
- Wed Feb 25, 2015 9:57 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Puppet Show (Rewrite in progress, explanation posted.)
- Replies: 118
- Views: 44579
Re: Puppet Show [OC Story] [UPDATED: The Festival! Part 1 an
I hope Chiyoko finds him at the festival first. She's my favorite so far and we all know she's the coolest out of the the new girls. (Not a request, just picking my team) I like her too, I just assumed she was out of the running since Suso seems to not even be considering her at this point. That sa...
- Tue Feb 24, 2015 11:21 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Puppet Show (Rewrite in progress, explanation posted.)
- Replies: 118
- Views: 44579
Re: Puppet Show [OC Story] [UPDATED: The Festival! Part 1 an
Now I'm liking Fuku even more. She's adorable in this update. ![Razz :P](./images/smilies/icon_razz.gif)
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- Wed Feb 18, 2015 8:00 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Puppet Show (Rewrite in progress, explanation posted.)
- Replies: 118
- Views: 44579
Re: Puppet Show [OC Story] [UPDATED: Chapter Seven!]
I was under the impression that he HAS taken the hint and is simply not too interested - probably because of one of the other two girls? Fair enough, I just took him calling her strange as him not getting it. That said, I sometimes miss things when they aren't explicitly stated. so there is that. I...
- Wed Feb 18, 2015 7:39 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Puppet Show (Rewrite in progress, explanation posted.)
- Replies: 118
- Views: 44579
Re: Puppet Show [OC Story] [UPDATED: Chapter Seven!]
Honestly? I like her too. And I'm kinda surprised Suso hasn't taken the hint yet, she's not exactly subtle.HoneyBakedHam wrote:I like Chiyoko. She kind of reminds me of Sakuya from Sister Princess, just without all the awkward incest taboo.
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