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by AntonSlavik020
Fri Apr 03, 2015 8:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 436270

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}

Oh, you changed your avatar. As someone who recognizes people on the forum based on their picture, I didn't recognize you initially. It may no longer be Maddie, but its still really cool. Who is it? Wait, you recognized her? I thought I was the only person on these forums that read The Royal Trap ....
by AntonSlavik020
Fri Apr 03, 2015 7:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 436270

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}

Oh, you changed your avatar. As someone who recognizes people on the forum based on their picture, I didn't recognize you initially. It may no longer be Maddie, but its still really cool. Who is it?
by AntonSlavik020
Fri Apr 03, 2015 6:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 436270

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}

It looks pretty cool, but it might be distracting. Thinking about it, I would probably prefer it without the flashing thumps.
by AntonSlavik020
Fri Apr 03, 2015 6:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A New Dawn - A Miki pseudo-route [Chapter 5 added 25/06/16]
Replies: 24
Views: 13566

Re: A New Dawn - A Miki's love story

Its not bad so far. Not a whole lot to comment on yet, as the story hasn't really started yet. I'll keep an eye on this story.
by AntonSlavik020
Fri Apr 03, 2015 8:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
Replies: 206
Views: 149063

Re: Miki: Fragments (Updated 3/4/15)

As long as what your writing is interesting, I'll take a longer chapter any day. Though I agree, the seriousness of the argument did seem to increase at a pretty extreme rate. Especially since by high school I stopped having stupid arguments with my friends. Makes it hard for me to relate.
by AntonSlavik020
Wed Apr 01, 2015 3:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 213110

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 4/1]

dewelar wrote: Looking forward to the more-and-more-apparent bittersweet ending to come...
God I hope not. I'm almost incapable of liking any ending that isn't mostly happy. Even bitter-sweet tends to be too sad for me. It does seem to be going in that direction, though.
by AntonSlavik020
Wed Apr 01, 2015 1:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 436270

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}

Now that I'm at my computer, I can leave a proper comment. I'm really interested in what Molly is hiding. I can't really blame Iwanako for not trusting her very much, with how shady she's being. Also, I'm really liking how her friendship with Hanako is going. Really looking forward to the festival!
by AntonSlavik020
Wed Apr 01, 2015 1:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A New Friend!
Replies: 12
Views: 9255

Re: A New Friend!

Well, to be honest I wasn't impressed - until the twist came along. That was really interesting. Seeing how Ikuno reacts to getting the notebook back would be interesting as well, but this is probably fine staying a one-shot. I had the same reaction, until I read the twist now I'm depressed =p It's...
by AntonSlavik020
Wed Apr 01, 2015 10:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 436270

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}

Mirage_GSM wrote:
That isn’t to say the previous LRC was terrible, but
I have to say I'm unfamiliar with that acronym and a quick romp on google doesn't yield any options that make sense here...
Learning Resource Center is my guess. That's what my high school and college libraries were called.
by AntonSlavik020
Mon Mar 30, 2015 10:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Cowlick and Claws!
Replies: 34
Views: 12896

Re: Cowlick and Claws!

That awkward moment where your strongly rooting against the protagonist. The longer they hide their relationship from their friends the more I'll be annoyed with them. They're going to have to tell them eventually, so the sooner they do so the less annoyed their friends will be at them for hiding it...
by AntonSlavik020
Sun Mar 29, 2015 2:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story [Updated 10/26/15]
Replies: 157
Views: 87889

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story

bubeez wrote:Hmm... perhaps doctor-patient confidentiality? The Nurse wouldn't want Hisao knowing what he isn't supposed to know.
Didn't think about that. That actually makes sense.
by AntonSlavik020
Sun Mar 29, 2015 2:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blue Haired Girls
Replies: 7
Views: 4691

Re: Blue Haired Girls

Really liked this. Love slice of life stuff, and as mentioned before, it's a unique pairing. I'm always interested when you post a story. Most of the time, they end up being good. This one was no exception.
by AntonSlavik020
Sun Mar 29, 2015 2:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story [Updated 10/26/15]
Replies: 157
Views: 87889

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story

I liked this chapter, though kinda disappointed the nurse did not pick up on her finding his office by herself. Yeah, I was looking forward to what he had to say about that too. Anyways, I'm glad Seiki finally told Hisao she has amnesia. I'm not a big fan of people hiding their disability from thei...
by AntonSlavik020
Wed Mar 25, 2015 8:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
Replies: 206
Views: 149063

Re: Miki: Fragments (Updated 25/3/15)

Another very well done chapter. I don't really like when characters are stubborn like Miki was being with the doctor initially, but you make it work. Also, this line, Now it turns out my repeated dreams are a product of my own stubbiness. Loved this line. Am I a bad person of laughing at it? Because...
by AntonSlavik020
Tue Mar 24, 2015 9:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lost in Translation - A Shizune Prequel
Replies: 49
Views: 23020

Re: Lost in Translation - A Shizune Prequel

Really liked Shizune's introduction speech. I'm not surprised pretty much the entire class(teacher included), were so caught off guard by it. Not that I expect anything less from her. Yamaku won't know what hit it.