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- Wed Apr 29, 2015 9:50 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Blank Slate - (Updated 12-16) Class Reunion
- Replies: 135
- Views: 95864
Re: Firing Blanks - One Shots
Sometimes I wish could enjoy post-bad/neutral ending stories, as I feel like this was probably a good one(and I too like Shizune/Hanako friendships). Unfortunately, just because of the way my mind works, as soon as I know it follows a bad end I'm unable to enjoy it. It just makes me feel sad. Basica...
- Tue Apr 28, 2015 1:47 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A New Dawn - A Miki pseudo-route [Chapter 5 added 25/06/16]
- Replies: 24
- Views: 13566
Re: A New Dawn - A Miki's love story
The main thing I noticed was that your using script format, which isn't ideal. Also, this isn't so much criticism as something I noticed, but Eikichi seems very similar to Miki(missing a hand, runs, doesn't like math). Not much to say beyond that.
- Tue Apr 28, 2015 12:02 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
- Replies: 206
- Views: 149063
Re: Miki: Fragments (Ch.13 Posted 28th April 2015)
Very good chapter. Loved the interaction between Miki and her dad, especially the fact that she seems to be willing to give him a chance to be a dad to her, despite what his mistake cost both of them. Looking forward to more of that.
- Sun Apr 26, 2015 7:10 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Puppet Show (Rewrite in progress, explanation posted.)
- Replies: 118
- Views: 44577
Re: Puppet Show [OC Story] Act 2 Update! 24/04
Ooooo I loved Sorry as a kid.HoneyBakedHam wrote:How about Sorry?
- Fri Apr 24, 2015 9:42 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Puppet Show (Rewrite in progress, explanation posted.)
- Replies: 118
- Views: 44577
Re: Puppet Show [OC Story] Act 2 Update! 24/04
Its starting to look like it will be Chiyoko after all, which I'm OK with. She seems fun. And I'm guessing the student council pres was held back for some medical reason, kinda like Emi, otherwise there is no way she's of age. Even Emi's just 19.
- Wed Apr 22, 2015 2:02 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Epilogue. (Emi Good Ending) *WIP*
- Replies: 5
- Views: 3406
Re: Epilogue. (Emi Good Ending)
What Brythain said. I didn't even read it once I saw the format.
- Mon Apr 20, 2015 6:02 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Mask Off: A Molly Route (Update 3/8)
- Replies: 72
- Views: 45956
Re: "Can you open your mind?" A Molly Pseudo-Route
Can't add anything else that someone hasn't already said, but pretty much agree with their points, like Molly feeling like a more defined character. I'll follow this because I tend to like Molly, though I don't have much to comment on the story itself yet.
- Wed Apr 15, 2015 10:03 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Breaking The Circle (Lilly Good Ending Epilogue)
- Replies: 11
- Views: 6793
Re: Breaking The Circle (Lilly Good Ending Epilogue)
I agree with what people have said so far. First part didn't really grab me, second part was a little better, and the third part was very fun to read. Can't really say anything someone else hasn't already said(what I get for arriving late I guess), but solid start overall. Looking forward to more.
- Sat Apr 11, 2015 12:26 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
- Replies: 864
- Views: 436270
Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
I just realized I'd been sitting on a preexisting image that would have been perfect for the OP, so I switched it out. In case anybody is wondering, it's not a commission. It just fits alarmingly well. Huh. If it wasn't for this story, what was it for? I'll interject here because why not. Its from ...
- Fri Apr 10, 2015 4:48 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
- Replies: 227
- Views: 147082
Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (updated 4/10)
I agree about the heart flutter scene. It was kinda confusing what exactly happened. That aside, solid chapter. And I knew Mirage was going to comment about the sweatervest. He mentioned how much he hates that meme recently.
- Fri Apr 10, 2015 4:42 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Gravity: A Molly Pseudo- Pseudo Route. Updated as of 11/03/2019
- Replies: 115
- Views: 93316
Re: Gravity-Molly pseudo route [04/10/15] Update*
Loved this chapter. Molly's awkwardness is great fun. And yeah, it takes real talent to kill a conversation that isn't even happening. Leave it to Hisao. ![Laughing :lol:](./images/smilies/icon_lol.gif)
![Laughing :lol:](./images/smilies/icon_lol.gif)
- Tue Apr 07, 2015 10:09 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
- Replies: 206
- Views: 149063
Re: Miki: Fragments (Updated 7/4/15)
You're right, this chapter was great. Miki's interaction with Ayumu was all kinds of d'aww. Look forward to getting to know him better, like what his last name is. ![Smile :)](./images/smilies/icon_smile.gif)
![Smile :)](./images/smilies/icon_smile.gif)
- Mon Apr 06, 2015 6:45 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Gravity: A Molly Pseudo- Pseudo Route. Updated as of 11/03/2019
- Replies: 115
- Views: 93316
Re: Gravity-Molly pseudo route [04/6/15] Update*
Its nice to see Taro get some love. Literally in this case. Also, I would love it if, as unlikely as it is, if Mutuo ended up being Agent Wormtooth. Probably wouldn't really work in a serious story, though. I uh, I thought I made it pretty obvious who it was? :wink: You probably did, but I don't te...
- Mon Apr 06, 2015 6:36 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Gravity: A Molly Pseudo- Pseudo Route. Updated as of 11/03/2019
- Replies: 115
- Views: 93316
Re: Gravity-Molly pseudo route [04/6/15] Update*
Its nice to see Taro get some love. Literally in this case. Also, I would love it if, as unlikely as it is, if Mutuo ended up being Agent Wormtooth. Probably wouldn't really work in a serious story, though.
- Mon Apr 06, 2015 6:23 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
- Replies: 206
- Views: 149063
Re: Miki: Fragments (Updated 5/4/15)
Glad to see Ikuno and Miki make up. Also, looking forward to meeting Miki's dad and getting some answers about what exactly happened.