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This was pretty amazing. Lots of fun to read, just like the main story. Love what you did with Akio.

Really looking forward to the next chapter. Parental drama is one of the kinds I DO like. I can't get enough of it in gravity falls and RWBY fanfics. Besides that, I agree, the last two chapters were more enjoyable. Glad to see Akio back to his snarky ways.

I gotta say,the sad vagina line is one of the funniest things I've read in a while. Still loving this story, btw. Just don;t have much to comment on right now besides that.

This story is so much frickin fun. Nice to see Taro, Ritsu and Akio getting some love(literally for two of them ). I honestly love all three of their personalities. Their banter is hilarious, I almost laughed out loud a couple times.

Sometimes I wish it were otherwise, but I know I can't enjoy a post bad end(I don't care what it's officially called, it's a bad end in my book) story. All I have to do is remember Lily's gone and I'm sad again. Had the same issue with Developments. Just not for me, I guess.

This was cute. Nothing wrong with more Shizune x Misha. Now that I think about it, I can't think of many stories like that that aren't really serious, so this is a welcome change from that. Can't really say anything that hasn't already been said, so good job with this. Its fun so far.

I know more happened in this chapter, but I'm mainly just glad Ryouta and Ikuno are gonna talk it out. It really annoys me when a couple gets into an argument(or even worse, breaks up) over a misunderstanding, mainly because it didn't have to happen. Honestly, until that was resolved, I was semi-ski...

Well that was depressing. To me, at least. Basically, its just not my cup of tea, which isn't surprising since I don't even like tea. Sorry. No I'm not. Anyways, it just wasn't something I stood any chance of personally enjoying. Contrary to popular belief, I actually CAN find enjoyment in depressin...

Shizune's reaction was unexpected, but not unwelcome. I really enjoyed their conversation and am really looking forward to the next chapter.

My only real question is were they writing in English, which would be weird, or if she just meant use better grammar.

Could be because I'm a sucker for harem romcoms (Nisekoi, My Teen RomCom SNAFU, etc.) and shoujo romance (with or without comedy) animes. It would explain why I'm loving this OC fanfic SOOO much. I'm kinda the opposite. I prefer if the romantic focus is mainly between just two people. I like it fin...

So far its not bad. The whole amnesia thing is a bit cliche', but done right it can be very interesting. I'll definitely be following this.

HoneyBakedHam wrote:I have trouble seeing the hype about RWBY. That and JoJo's Bizarre Adventures, don't know why.

Not for everyone I suppose. One of my closer friends can't get into it either.

HoneyBakedHam wrote:You set yourself up for that one, though.

Blame RWBY. Not my fault that show is so good.

Geez, this chapter was the Great Wall of Text. Definitely gonna feel this one in the morning from the amount of reading, instead of sleeping. If you thought that was a lot of reading I had to read the last 3 chapters thanks to my absence. That took a while. Nonetheless, I really like this chapter w...

I'm gonna but in 12 days after the last reply. I never even use the word "revise". Just study and review. I've only ever seen/heard Europeans use the term. Not saying they don't use it in America, I've just never heard anyone I know say it.