I wish I had some talent for drawing... you drew hanako very good
looks like the story format and tha narration has improved, good job!
I really liked the dialogs of lilly and akira, very funny and precise.
keep up the good work
Search found 5 matches
- Mon Mar 11, 2013 5:23 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku (Updated 1/2/14)
- Replies: 217
- Views: 92566
- Mon Mar 11, 2013 5:13 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Fanfic - KS Afterstory: Lilly Edition
- Replies: 18
- Views: 11695
Re: Fanfic - KS Afterstory: Lilly Edition
looking good so far!
hisao is really hilarious in here, hope this will continue soon!
hisao is really hilarious in here, hope this will continue soon!
- Thu Mar 07, 2013 4:17 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku (Updated 1/2/14)
- Replies: 217
- Views: 92566
Re: Mini-Fics
I think this is really cute!
The script format And descrptions are a little bit weird, but the characters are believable enough, Also be a little more carefull with the double space in the narration because it breaks the reading flow.
Other than that, nice fluffy story!
The script format And descrptions are a little bit weird, but the characters are believable enough, Also be a little more carefull with the double space in the narration because it breaks the reading flow.
Other than that, nice fluffy story!
- Mon Mar 04, 2013 8:06 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Did we change?
- Replies: 295
- Views: 95184
Re: inspiration
In my case to start writting And stop Being scared of life, because happiness is not going to fall from the sky.
- Sun Mar 03, 2013 3:57 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: KS in JAGS wonderland
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1758
KS in JAGS wonderland
Okay, somehow I feel this will get me banned or at least is gong to be deleted. Hi there!!! I just recently joined the forums And I will attempt to ask for some oppinions. So anyway, I am working on a crossover fic of KS And JAGS wonderland, anybody heard of that before??? If not, basically JAGS ...