I wish I had some talent for drawing... you drew hanako very good
looks like the story format and tha narration has improved, good job!
I really liked the dialogs of lilly and akira, very funny and precise.
keep up the good work
I think this is really cute!
The script format And descrptions are a little bit weird, but the characters are believable enough, Also be a little more carefull with the double space in the narration because it breaks the reading flow.
Okay, somehow I feel this will get me banned or at least is gong to be deleted. Hi there!!! I just recently joined the forums And I will attempt to ask for some oppinions. So anyway, I am working on a crossover fic of KS And JAGS wonderland, anybody heard of that before??? If not, basically JAGS ...