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If you don't mind me asking, what is FJ? FJ is Funnyjunk, I uploaded it there too. http://www.funnyjunk.com/channel/katawashoujo/Rin+Tezuka+Fan+Art+-+Feels/YkdnGLx/ And thanks for the tips. From all of you. I do want to improve. It sounds like giant anime-style eyes are unpopular, so I'll try to ...

ReCodes wrote:good concept but the shading is too much and overall, it's overused
correct me if i'm wrong

Yes, I suppose I really went to town with the cross hatching. Still, I definitely intended for it to be WAY TOO DARK. (Though not the most appealing style I suppose)
Thanks for the feedback.

I got Rin's neutral ending and HOLY SHIT did I ever get a feel! Drawing this made me feel slightly less sad. Drawn with Sharpie pen. Please let me know what you think. Last time I uploaded art I was told that the image was a little too large, so I'm attaching a compressed image. but if you want to ...

Thank you for the feedback. Your advice will certainly improve my future drawings.

Hello. I am new. I drew this. What do you think?
(I'm aware the image is large. perhaps too large?)

full image:
http://doctorkolo.deviantart.com/art/Ha ... -355104099