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- Sun Apr 14, 2013 4:29 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 12 Updated
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Re: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 12 Updated
While it is nice read, it still break my suspension of disbelief, that no one would do nothing with his gaping hole, even if MC don't want it. Nooope, not buying it. I never said they wouldn't, or even that they couldn't. I'm just getting to a point where someone can ask about it without it seeing ...
- Sat Apr 13, 2013 3:48 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 12 Updated
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Re: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 11 Updated
This turned out to be a bit longer than I expected, Chapter 12 Sleeping becomes far more difficult than I was hoping. Thanks Dad. One bad night leads to another, and another. Before I know it it’s Saturday. Hoping to get some rest I spend as much time as I can in bed. That is of course, until the w ...
- Sat Apr 06, 2013 7:28 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 12 Updated
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Re: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 10 Updated
chapter 11 Two hours of being tutored turn out quite well. Between Shizune’s examples and Mishas explanations I manage to get an improved grasp of some of the basic grades of Kanji. Every so often Misha would leave to get a few drinks whilst me and Shizune would practice my handwriting. I still h ...
- Tue Apr 02, 2013 1:14 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 12 Updated
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Re: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 9 Updated
There's a bit of an important note at the end of this. But first the rather late tenth chapter. chapter 10 So here I am. Same tree as before setting a new world record for speed eating. I’ll be damned if I’m going to get caught eating again, so embarrassing. On the plus side, I've managed to get int ...
- Tue Mar 19, 2013 1:14 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 12 Updated
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Re: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 8 Updated
chapter 9 The rest of my day zooms by pretty quickly. Having no plans for the afternoon I ended up going back to my room and started decorating. Nothing fancy, just some posters and a new set of black bed sheets. The room was too bright anyway, needed to be turned down a couple of shades. If only I ...
- Thu Mar 14, 2013 5:07 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 12 Updated
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Re: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 8 Updated
“If you say so. Just make sure you talk to someone if you need to. Uh... Have ou read Emi's path? If you did, do you really think it's appropriate to have her of all people give this advice? The story is coming along nicely, though. I can comfortably say it's among the better stories posted r ...
- Thu Mar 14, 2013 4:09 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 12 Updated
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Re: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 7 Updated
I may be taking a couple days of from writing this soon. I have plans for where I'm going with this, I just am rather inexperienced with writing, so have been trying to ease myself in before diving headfirst. I don't know how obvious this is, but the whole point of me writing this will be explored ...
- Mon Mar 11, 2013 5:29 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 12 Updated
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Re: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 6 Updated
My first attempt at a more conversation heavy chapter. Not sure how It's going but I'm happy with it so far. chapter 7 A solitary bell signals the start of lunch. This morning could not have dragged on longer. Apart from the general gossip such as ‘did you hear Saki broke her nose?’ and ‘you notice h ...
- Sun Mar 10, 2013 3:32 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 12 Updated
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Re: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 5 Updated
chapter 6 Urgh my head. The hell am I? Considering the last thing I remember is nothing but pitch black there's a lot of white. Wait . . . I know this room. This is . . . “Well good morning Riiiiich!” The bearer of that stupid grin spins round on his chair. The nurses office. Seems he’s spoken to Mi ...
- Sat Mar 09, 2013 12:53 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 12 Updated
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Re: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 3
And heres the next one. Double post apologies. chapter 5 The walk is filled with some basic small talk, mostly about England and Japans differences. Neither of the council seems to believe I hate tea. I hope whoever wrote that stereotype in stone is suffering for his crimes. Still, this is nice. I’m ...
- Sat Mar 09, 2013 12:51 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 12 Updated
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Re: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 3
Well I got them both done. Chapters 4's here and 5 will be up in the next post. chapter 4 The rest of the day passes by quickly. I managed to catch a bit of sleep in English, I mean my home country made the damn language, I can do this in my sleep. Only problem was waking up to my notes covered in ...
- Fri Mar 08, 2013 8:18 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 12 Updated
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Re: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 3
Wow, I show up to Japanese 101. Anyways my mind was bugging me so I thought I'd give some notice about stuff, not sure how many care though. Basically I have my 4th chapter done, but I really wasn't happy with it on it's own so I'll be putting it up tomorrow with chapter 5 once I finish it. I had ...
- Thu Mar 07, 2013 5:32 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 12 Updated
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Re: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 3
Fun fact: In the novel Misha doesn't use the -chan suffix for anyone but Shizune and Hisao. She calls everyone else by their normal names: Emi, Lilly, Hanako - not sure at the moment if she ever talks to Rin - even Hideaki. She calls Jigoro "Mr. Shicchan's father" once though. Still whenever Misha ...
- Thu Mar 07, 2013 2:01 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 12 Updated
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Re: OC: Mirrors and Windows.
Gonna be posting chapter 3 here now, but I'd like to comment on some criticisms I've had first. I notice It's a bit similar to how Hisao enters, but that was slightly intended. Firstly to give the character a bit of similarity to him circumstance wise, and secondly so I have a way of starting ...
- Wed Mar 06, 2013 5:49 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 12 Updated
- Replies: 46
- Views: 14591
Re: OC: Mirrors and Windows.
Hmm... So far, I like it. Your character seems stuck with a rather unique disability/deformity, and him being from England is a nice change of pace. You do make me wonder who he's going after though. Anyway, carry on. I would like to point out, the plan here Isn't that hes going after someone. I'll ...