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by Marching Can
Thu Apr 11, 2013 1:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beside the Dying Fire
Replies: 5
Views: 4626

Re: Beside the Dying Fire

Definitely an interesting setting. But its such a depressing reality that I don't think I could bring myself to follow it with these characters. It would just hurt too much to watch them suffer and die. :(

Yeah, I don't think I could either.
It was pretty hard to write as it was, to be honest ...
by Marching Can
Wed Apr 10, 2013 2:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beside the Dying Fire
Replies: 5
Views: 4626

Beside the Dying Fire (2/2)

Only the sound of failing lungs. Hanako bites her lower lip. It took seven days to kill, less than an hour to come back. She couldn't keep count of the hours left. Only Misha kept count. The pain of it was unbearable.

"Misha? Shizune?" Hanako slowly teases the door open, stepping into the room ...
by Marching Can
Wed Apr 10, 2013 2:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beside the Dying Fire
Replies: 5
Views: 4626

Beside the Dying Fire

It's a oneshot, but I cut this into two posts because lines or whatever.
Inspired by this song.
Pastebin: http://pastebin.com/Sq6BWbr6
Please enjoy and let me know what you think.

Beside the Dying Fire

The sound of wood chopping, echoing through an empty Alaskan forest. The occasional bird ...
by Marching Can
Tue Apr 09, 2013 2:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Painter on the Road (Takashi and Friends/WIP Title)
Replies: 4
Views: 2129

Re: Painter on the Road (Takashi and Friends/WIP Title)

Well, I missed my own self-imposed deadline, which is really just a reminder as to why I stopped self-imposing deadlines in the first place.

I'll have plenty of free time in the next few weeks, but I do apologise for the lack of update.

Good writing, good grammar, no obvious typos - and lots of ...
by Marching Can
Sun Mar 31, 2013 9:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Painter on the Road (Takashi and Friends/WIP Title)
Replies: 4
Views: 2129

Re: Painter on the Road (Takashi and Friends/WIP Title)

Continued from: Prologue: Family...

When we finally pull up at the school gates, I start to wonder if the rest of the day is going to be full of changed people, because my friends wave at us while father parks as meticulously as he feels he needs to.

I can't say I'm as enthusiastic about it as ...
by Marching Can
Sun Mar 31, 2013 9:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Painter on the Road (Takashi and Friends/WIP Title)
Replies: 4
Views: 2129

Painter on the Road (Takashi and Friends/WIP Title)

So, here's my first Katawa Shoujo fic, hope people enjoy it and let me know where I can improve, whether or not I should continue this at all, and other things.

Pastebin: http://pastebin.com/BXv4n2Bk
Here's a short reading guide for certain details about current and future things planned for this ...