Somehow I have the feeling this is supposed to be Akira, but the age difference is a bit...
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Well, anyway there are a few things you could improve in your writing, but for now your biggest problem by far are tenses: You switch between past and present more often than Doctor Who in an average ...
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- Fri Feb 08, 2013 6:33 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Newton's Laws (Mutou fic)
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- Fri Feb 08, 2013 11:18 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Newton's Laws (Mutou fic)
- Replies: 11
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Newton's Laws (Mutou fic)
Hello, this is my first post in this forums and my first KS fanfiction.
This fanfic is about none other than Akio Mutou, the awesome looking physics teacher and homeroom teacher of class 3-3
So without further ado, I'll just post it here
EDIT: I took the time to edit my original post properly. The ...
This fanfic is about none other than Akio Mutou, the awesome looking physics teacher and homeroom teacher of class 3-3
So without further ado, I'll just post it here
EDIT: I took the time to edit my original post properly. The ...