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The cynic in me suspects Akira invited Hisao to the jazz club so she'd have one beauty of a reason to break up with Tetsuo if he does show up and throw a fit. Of course, that will lead to many complications . Oh I can see it now. After sitting alone at his desk pondering his relationship with Akira ...

Well, it's incredibly questionable to bring a friend who is romantically interested in you on something that was originally meant as a date with your SO. Anyone else thinking that Akira (in)conveniently blacked out that particular bit? There was enough for a hangover at least... I'm going to say no ...

Another great update, I like getting a better look into Akira and Tetsuo's relationship. It's also nice to see Tetsuo evolve into his own character beyond just being Hisao's "(unknowing) rival in love" so to speak. Can't wait for the next update, It's posible I'm looking forward to the Jazz club as ...

There is going to be a split into a neutral end near the end of this act. I'm still debating the possibility of a bad end, seeing as how anything I can think of is just a matter of forced drama, and I'd like to employ something that actually hits as a "oh shi- you dun goof'd" moment rather than ...

Nice update, I really enjoyed the RIn and Emi appearances in this chapter. Also, you are doing an excellent of building up anticipation for the eventual Akira-Hisao reveal, I can't wait for the next installment.

One question, do you intend to split this at some point into a good/bad end or no?

Well it's 4:00am, I should probably at least try and sleep. Huh, Scissorlips posted on the Suzu route, might as well check it out. Oh, looks like he's just responding to feedback, probably an update about where he is at, makes sense, it still says updated 1/17. I suppose I'll read through real ...

ruby just popped into my head What do you mean it "just popped in"? It's her friggin birthstone, and mine too. Now, whether she can recognize that and not be troubled by the thought of her birthday is another thing. You totally could use that as a little development arc if you want. Just saying. It ...

it's pretty good so far, i like the idea although i can't escape thoughts of Hanako in a wood cabin burning down ;_; Looking forward to future installments! Thanks for reading and don't worry, I can confidently say that Hanako will not be involved in a cabin fire. especially the Proposal moment ...

Thanks for the edit, I really missed a few egregious errors there. I'll have to improve my self editing. Also thanks for pointing out the awkward transition there, a few sentences must have gotten cut out because those were never supposed to be back to back.

Hello, after playing the game and reading a wide variety of fan fiction, I've decided to contribute my own work. This is the first chapter in a planned series, I'm expecting to write around 5 to 6 chapters including this one. I know where I want the story to go, it's really just a matter of writing ...

Fantastic update, I haven't the slightest idea whether Reciprocate is the choice that leads to the bad or good end, so well done not telegraphing where the story was heading with this choice. Tradition is to lead with the bad choice, but I think there are other indications of this going to the bad ...

Fantastic update, I haven't the slightest idea whether Reciprocate is the choice that leads to the bad or good end, so well done not telegraphing where the story was heading with this choice.

I'm sad to see it end but it was an excellent read, you wrote the character of Rin tremendously.