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by neio
Sun Apr 28, 2013 3:56 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Thoughts on the H-scenes?
Replies: 1289
Views: 323948

Re: Thoughts on the H-scenes?

Jobriq wrote:
YZQ wrote: Also, you can easily read erotic novels (in braille) in public and not get caught easily.
Those new shipment of Braille novels to the library :shock: Yamaku's library does have a large Braille section lol
Fifty textures of grain?
by neio
Sun Apr 28, 2013 3:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 738241

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/23]

Hisao is talking about the time there (Lilly had already changed into pyjamas, even though it's only seven in the evening), but I think an it is needed between despite and only. I know. "It" is the missing word I referenced. Actually, it works both ways. In this case, "it" is an...
by neio
Thu Apr 25, 2013 8:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 738241

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/23]

Despite only being seven, she’s already changed into a pair of royal-blue pajamas Either Lilly is seven years old, or you're missing a word. Hisao is talking about the time there (Lilly had already changed into pyjamas, even though it's only seven in the evening), but I think an it is needed betwee...
by neio
Wed Apr 24, 2013 8:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)
Replies: 169
Views: 1925665

Re: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)

If I may... Reduce redundancy. DO NOT do this: "Oh yeah, well, your face!" he exclaimed with a joking tone. Trust your readers. They should all be able to figure out from context and content that the person above is joking. Spelling it out for them adds words, cheapens the story, and obstr...
by neio
Wed Apr 24, 2013 7:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 738241

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/23]

I bring stuff and things! "Dude, I used to rule the world. Seas would rise when I gave the word." Coldplay? "Busy busy busy.” Kenji says, crossing his arms and shifting his weight back and forth. Don't ask me why, but I immediately thought of this guy . I raise my knuckles up to the d...
by neio
Sun Apr 21, 2013 10:29 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: If Hanako's scars looked like this...
Replies: 301
Views: 102456

Re: If Hanako's scars looked like this...

This thread:
- "Yeah Hanako's burns aren't that bad, artistic license, inside counts, etc"
- "I was bullied" "I destroyed bullies with my bare hands"
- "Xanatos has no soul"
- Sympathy for the 95% burns girl
- "inside counts, etc"

:? :?:
by neio
Sat Apr 20, 2013 12:02 am
Forum: Support
Topic: How do I keep the music playing?
Replies: 5
Views: 3525

Re: How do I keep the music playing?

You can download the whole KS soundtrack as an album and play that in something like Windows Media Player. I thought about this, but the way the music changes to suit each environment and the sound effects are something that I would miss. I think I'll just put up with the stop-starting, it's not ba...
by neio
Thu Apr 18, 2013 6:42 pm
Forum: Support
Topic: How do I keep the music playing?
Replies: 5
Views: 3525

Re: How do I keep the music playing?

This is a feature of the KS game (or possibly the RenPy engine; I haven't checked) where it mutes once it loses audio focus. You can download the whole KS soundtrack as an album and play that in something like Windows Media Player.
by neio
Wed Apr 17, 2013 8:30 pm
Forum: Support
Topic: How do I keep the music playing?
Replies: 5
Views: 3525

Re: How do I keep the music playing?

What OS are you on? For my Windows 7 setup, the music keeps playing even when the game is minimized.
by neio
Wed Apr 17, 2013 8:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 854
Views: 499896

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Updated 04/17/2013 (Chapter 31 posted)

but with Midori and I instead. with Midori and me... While I'm fairly certain you're wrong about that, I did change that aside to: "--except for Midori and myself." Aha! A grammar debate! The actual difference is subject vs object, but the simplest way to look at it is taking out the othe...
by neio
Sat Apr 13, 2013 11:04 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: You have been playing too much KS when...
Replies: 2412
Views: 908259

Re: You have been playing too much KS when...

Nobody in Particular wrote:...I want my life back...
...I don't regret a thing...
by neio
Fri Apr 12, 2013 4:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 212989

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route (OCxHisao) [Updated 4/12]

"Normal irregularities. Hah! That doesn't make any sense." "Ms. Katayama, please." Nurse half-shouts into the curtain. Yes, great! A very funny scene. Your Rika is well done. Things like throwing her cigarette off the roof after mentioning that it's her last one really add to he...
by neio
Sun Apr 07, 2013 10:45 pm
Forum: Support
Topic: KS Saves
Replies: 2
Views: 3053

Re: KS Saves

What OS are you on? If it's any sort of Windows, go to %APPDATA% (include percent signs) and look for the RenPy folder.
by neio
Sun Apr 07, 2013 11:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 854
Views: 499896

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 03/30/2013

Instead of the new chapter, I spent the last few days going back to chapter 1 and 2, cleaning up the narrative, adding back some things I should have put in, making the prose a little less amateurish, and doing general maintenance on the grammar and structure. The first 5 chapters were written ON t...
by neio
Thu Apr 04, 2013 10:15 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: You have been playing too much KS when...
Replies: 2412
Views: 908259

Re: You have been playing too much KS when...

but I'm not a violent person in real life. Few video game players are. That's why they play video games instead of being Ted Bundy. This game violence will always be easier to digest than this real violence . That's also actually a growing concern for super high-def screens (e.g. 4K) coupled with e...