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Introduce the new character, and then immediately end the chapter? You clever bastard. Now, I have to read the next chapter. Ha, sorry about that. Originally, I did not have it ending there. But the chapter was already leaning on the long side for posting, and I found it broke nicely there. "C...

The grounds seem familiar at least. I'm usually already up at this time anyway. Under different circumstances, of course. The normal crowd seems to be out. The same early risers and over achievers that I see on a daily basis. The same ones who probably think the same of me. The ones who don't know m...

Chapter Four: Coming Up Short Mornings are overrated. Then again, a lot of people hate mornings, too. I guess I'm not a morning person. No big surprise there, I suppose. I had hoped after my most normal night of sleep in God knows how long, I would feel a little better. But waking up to sunlight is...

For some reason, I'm very interested as to what's happening with this Makoto fella and Miki. Dunno why. Should be fun. Having fun writing it, in any case. [insert encouraging message here}. I suppose that means I get to come up with my own? *thinking* Think I got a good one. You really are far too ...

He's tall. Not my size by any means, but probably only a bit shorter. He's smiling like a madman, his gray eyes sparkling. His short brown hair is gelled up into spikes in the front. Never liked that. But it does seem familiar. “Yuuma! Hey, man!” He strides up, wild smile still in place, until he se...

I freeze and blink a few times, just to make sure I'm not hallucinating. Nope, the image is definitely still there. Makoto is sitting on a bench in front of the auxiliary building sitting rather closely to Miki, their heads together and talking quickly in hushed tones. There is no possibly way that ...

Chapter Three: Signs in the Dark I envy people who dream. At least I think I do. A part of me finds the whole thing exhausting. I go to sleep to stop thinking; why in the world would I want to keep my brain busy all night with silly dreams? But it has to be better than just empty sleep. Of course, ...

Pretty cute. Felt a little fast, but it's a one-shot so I can't really complain. It can be hard to take on a character like Suzu considering the content already out there, but yours doesn't feel like a clone. all in the span of about 3 seconds. It felt like 5 minutes. Some people might disagree, but...

Interesting. I like your use of imagery and the pacing feels nice. However, I am not a fan of the format. Intentional or not, a solid block of text makes it difficult to sift through. Honestly, I feel as if the pacing of your piece would only benefit from some line breaks (and it was already pretty ...

Love the story so far. Ex music major over here, so I dig how much you incorporate your own musical knowledge into the dialogue and subtext. As far as this chapter goes, I was a little put off by your Rin at first, but the more I read it the more I like what you have done with her. Well done, lookin...

I have been meaning to comment on this story for ages and thought it was about time I showed some support. Love the story. A fully fleshed out Akira is pretty dang awesome and it's very interesting how you tied her into Hisao's life. I really dig how you branched us into the most recent act. It can ...

I'm wondering how he got to know Emi as well as he does. Especially given her reluctance to open up in canon. A legitimate concern I had when writing her in to this. Emi is a likable girl and fairly popular, and while she doesn't have too many close friends (mainly Rin and I guess Nurse), she most ...

No, their not. They're. Fixed. I always expect some errors to get through, but damn if I'm not annoyed that I let those through. That would be a feat, since 3-1 is for he hearing impaired Ah, so glad someone got that. It's a minor detail for the time being, but I have some plans for 3-1 in the futu...

The journey continues. Chapter Two: Lack of Luck “Iwasaki?” Hm? What? “Iwasaki?” Jesus, what?! “Iwasaki!” A sharp jolt snaps me out of whatever dreamless sleep I might have been having. A large history textbook lies on my desk. Pretty sure it's not mine. Did I even bring mine today? “Sleep on your o...

Also liked his banter with Emi. If he is supposed to be usually not as good at conversations (as you seemed to imply at the end) he might have been a bit too witty with Emi... I was a little worried about this. Without giving anything away it's hard for to justify the action, but I hope it comes ac...