I like it. Well done on the final part.
Oh, and I understand why you skipped ahead to the last of the story, but I'd still like to read some of the other scenes if you ever decide to do some of them.
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- Fri Mar 01, 2013 7:17 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hokkaido-Lilly's perspective (Updated 2/28)
- Replies: 77
- Views: 34021
- Thu Feb 28, 2013 7:47 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hokkaido-Lilly's perspective (Updated 2/28)
- Replies: 77
- Views: 34021
Re: Hokkaido+Finale-Lilly's perspective (Updated 2/25) NEW I
Hmm, I can't say this last part is what I believe Lilly would be thinking, but it was entertaining. It's your interpretation, as well as your story. Write what you want, how you want. For something actually noteworthy, the part where Hideaki is questioning Lilly is a bit jumbled. Hideaki is talking ...
- Fri Feb 15, 2013 5:05 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hokkaido-Lilly's perspective (Updated 2/28)
- Replies: 77
- Views: 34021
Re: Hokkaido-Lilly's perspective (Updated 2/14, read 1st pos
Yep, I agree with "Plague". Lilly never divulges her intentions about leaving, Hisao just assumes that she will. Not once does he say anything about wanting her to stay, or tell her his feelings. Actually, he doesn't even ask her if she WANTS to leave. Think about it: Lilly can keep her entire ...
- Thu Feb 07, 2013 2:29 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Question For Everybody
- Replies: 58
- Views: 27083
Re: Question For Everybody
Maybe it's just because I'm a bit older, but none of the "seize the day" sort of sentiments lingered or hit me. Rather, I was left feeling a bit reminiscent and regretful for some of the possibilities and opportunities I didn't take when I was younger. I think KS does a very good job of intimating ...
- Thu Feb 07, 2013 1:21 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: What else made you cry?
- Replies: 270
- Views: 85614
Re: What else made you cry?
I had a long list, but decided to just post one:
The movie 'Schindler's List': One of the best movies ever made, in my opinion. What's more, it's based on real events. At the end, Liam Neeson got me stronger than any other movie has. How can you not be affected by that? How much is a life worth?
The movie 'Schindler's List': One of the best movies ever made, in my opinion. What's more, it's based on real events. At the end, Liam Neeson got me stronger than any other movie has. How can you not be affected by that? How much is a life worth?
- Wed Feb 06, 2013 11:54 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Lilly's Angry Moment
- Replies: 74
- Views: 30018
Re: Lilly's Angry Moment
Well, all of you seem to think her anger is about her leaving. While I agree that it plays a role, I took it differently. Earlier on, Hisao apologizes for his disability, but Lilly says he shouldn't apologize for the way he was born. She says, "I've never apologized for being blind, not once." She ...