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That was a terrific update. I really liked how it addressed the elephant in the room that is Hisao's heart, which I feel isn't pointed out enough with some of these stories.

I gotta say, I absolutely love the way you write Shizune in this, mostly because I'd like to think that college just allowed Shizune's predisposition to snark to blossom into one of those gigantic ass flowers that bloom every 150 years.

I was fully aware of that, meant that in the best way possible since it kinda made me cry a bit.

Fuck you Trivun... Just... fuck you buddy.

Not gonna lie, I fully expected her to visit Hisao's grave at some point during the story. It feels like way too many authors run to kill off Hisao to make a good dramatic story. Good job on keeping me guessing!

Oh holy balls, I keep forgetting to check this now I'm super nervous about which ending'll be done first. Craaaaap...

That may have been the greatest thing ever. Mostly because it reminded me of the first time I got drunk, which involved less chess and more me screaming at the final boss in Dragon Quest IV. In my defense the guy's arms were flying off. Anyhoo, terrific update, can't wait to read more Trivun!

Alrighty then, cool I'm just gonna skip all the endings save the good one because I'm a bit of a wuss like that. I've got 95% complete on my game because apart from Rin's fight end, I haven't done any of the bad endings.

Not gonna lie I'm actually on edge about what route you're going to use as the "true" ending.

I'd be an absolute hypocrite if I called you on that, I've been in a similar mode for an LP I've been doing and my co-commentator's getting a little impatient about it. I hate that kinda feeling but it's always best to just let it pass.

As much as I absolutely love the KS soundtrack, I think for a good chunk of this the Clannad soundtrack works a little better. Particularly the track Shining in the Sky during the finale. Then again if I actually wrote a fanfic for this I'd be one of those people who'd insist on putting what songs ...

This was definitely a terrific story, I mean I got pretty pissed off at Rika at certain parts for... well being her, but anything that can really evoke that kind of emotion from me is definitely something special. That and it gave me something to read during my Geology lectures, so there that is.

Terrific chapter, Trivun. I can't pretend that I've had even a quarter the amount of trauma that Hanako's had but I've had moments where my mental state goes somewhere similar to where hers is right now. That's probably why she's one of my favorite characters since I can somewhat identify with her ...

Woohoo, update this weekend! Yet another thing for me to look forward to after my midterm! Are you planning on adding an epilogue or something to the good end, or is it going to end at the same point as in the game?

Whelp, spent the better part of last week catching up on this story. I just switched to a new computer after my old one's fan died so I'm looking for motivation to start up another run through all the stories. This'll probably do it! Keep up the good writing!