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- Thu Mar 07, 2013 11:47 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
- Replies: 75
- Views: 25757
Re: A Painful Past (OC) On hold until 3/9/13
kinda weird how this thread went from two pages too four in the span of a day
- Thu Mar 07, 2013 11:11 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
- Replies: 75
- Views: 25757
Re: A Painful Past (OC) SC 3 update (3/3/13)
Statistically, Emi tackles 90% of all new students within two days of their arrival. ... Subverted for once^^° You used the word 'image' when you meant 'imagine'. And 'runaway' should be one word here. At least, I think that's why Mirage quoted it. The change from getting run into by Emi to Ikuno i...
- Thu Mar 07, 2013 11:08 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
- Replies: 75
- Views: 25757
Re: A Painful Past (OC) On hold until 3/9/13
Maybe it is just the way I read into it, but some aspect(s) of his condition I could imagine, wouldn't go unnoticed by like Shizune or others well she did notice his arm shaking. and as she said err... signed [Naomi has told me a lot about you and your daughters] so its safe to say she knows about ...
- Thu Mar 07, 2013 10:34 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
- Replies: 75
- Views: 25757
Re: A Painful Past (OC) On hold until 3/9/13
I've been through this thread quite a few times recently, and aside from issues already brought up. I think that you really need to plan this out a bit more before releasing it. I will say that I am in no way qualified to make any critical notes about this, but when starting up, make sure to have t...
- Thu Mar 07, 2013 9:55 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
- Replies: 75
- Views: 25757
Re: A Painful Past (OC) On hold until 3/9/13
okay fixed
- Thu Mar 07, 2013 9:40 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 12 Updated
- Replies: 46
- Views: 13961
Re: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 3
I never liked her nick names in the VN because i never knew how to friggin pronounce them. I always assumed they were pronounced like "High-Chan" and "Shy-Chan". They're not. :) They're actually pronounced like "Hit-chan" and "Shit-chan." :lol: you have got t...
- Thu Mar 07, 2013 9:39 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
- Replies: 75
- Views: 25757
Re: A Painful Past (OC) SC 3 update (3/7/13)
i added a poll at the top of the page for he next two day's cast you're vote there
- Thu Mar 07, 2013 9:35 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
- Replies: 75
- Views: 25757
Re: A Painful Past (OC) SC 3 update (3/3/13)
I tried, but I simply can't get into this. I keep mentally picturing Shizune's brother and the school's librarian whenever you refer to Hideaki and Yuuko by name and it throws me out of the story every time, Naomi as well, to a lesser extent. I agree. There's a reason stories don't use the same nam...
- Thu Mar 07, 2013 8:02 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
- Replies: 75
- Views: 25757
Re: A Painful Past (OC) SC 3 update (3/7/13)
anyone have a complaint about my writing style or how i characterise some characters? I'm just making sure i have everything before i continue writing scene 4 so feel free to bring up problems from scene 1 or 2
- Thu Mar 07, 2013 7:55 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 12 Updated
- Replies: 46
- Views: 13961
Re: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 3
I never liked her nick names in the VN because i never knew how to friggin pronounce them. I always assumed they were pronounced like "High-Chan" and "Shy-Chan". They're not. :) They're actually pronounced like "Hit-chan" and "Shit-chan." :lol: you have got t...
- Thu Mar 07, 2013 7:53 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
- Replies: 75
- Views: 25757
Re: Chapter 1 Scene 3:check up time.
“I mean come on straight to the mount? Hmph! You have no class Ikuno!” she says in a disappointed tone. “Damn it Miki! That isn’t what I was doing!” the light brown haired girl in the same frantic tone. “I take it that you’re Mister Winters?” I turn and reply with an entertained voice. “Yes I’m Hid...
- Thu Mar 07, 2013 7:07 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
- Replies: 75
- Views: 25757
Re: A Painful Past (OC) SC 3 update (3/3/13)
The disease gets worse as time goes on or when you don't use your medication. and like the nurse said he got it from a parent it isn't unheard of for it to be hereditary some kids develop it around seventeen (Hideaki developed it around eighteen)
- Thu Mar 07, 2013 5:51 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
- Replies: 75
- Views: 25757
Re: A Painful Past (OC) SC 3 update (3/3/13)
so how does everyone feel about Hideaki's disability being Parkinson's disease?
- Thu Mar 07, 2013 5:38 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
- Replies: 75
- Views: 25757
Re: A Painful Past (OC) SC 3 update (3/3/13)
if I’m ever told to report to the principles’ office. I'm not sure if Yamaku has an office of principles. If so Shizune would probably occupy it. The principal might have an office in the administrative building, though. ;-) it collides with me with what I image is the force of a run away freight t...
- Thu Mar 07, 2013 5:34 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 12 Updated
- Replies: 46
- Views: 13961
Re: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 3
I never liked her nick names in the VN because i never knew how to friggin pronounce them.