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Comrade wrote:hmmmm, i think i need to add more spacing between lines here.

LorSquirrel wrote:Do students at Yamaku often play let out bloodcurdling screams when they're playing hacky sack?

In my highschool, people were screaming all the time, so I just assumed it was the same there.

Public school sounds... interesting...

I finish taking my morning pills and am about to head out to school when I hear a horrible scream outside the window. Probably just some first years playing or something. I laughed my ass off when I read this. Do students at Yamaku often play let out bloodcurdling screams when they're playing hacky...

Mirage_GSM wrote:No.
1. No requesting.

Let me re-frase what I wrote before. Someone needs to make something like this.

2. It's impolite to simply continue another person's story without permission, even if this is just the fragment of a story.

Okay then just make something with zombies in it.

Someone needs to continue this. I second this notion. I want at LEAST one good (and I mean GOOD, 50k+ words, cus one-shots and short stories are no fun, for me anyways) zombie fanfic. I can see Lilly going badass mode on zombies with her ninja-hearing, Rin going MMA master and flying kicking zombie...

Someone needs to continue this.

I would offer my help as well, but well... that would require me to actually be good at spelling.

Bahahahaha You poor bastard! You're looking for the allusive sweet spot that very few people ever find!

"Who is your favorite character in KS?"

Not much I can say that hasn't been said already... so I'll just say I like it so far.

Oscar Wildecat wrote: Of course, humans are flawed beings. If they weren't, they would be squirrels.

I fixed that last part for you.

Only two little nitpicks: Fixed... I think. The uncle seems like an interesting character... Good. I was afraid he would come across just a little creepy. You seem to introduce a lot of characters here. I'm not sure if you want to keep some of them as recurring or if those are supposed to be one-of...

What are some free VN's that are good?

Before I begin I would like to thank Oscar Wildecat for proof reading this. He caught several dozen errors that I would have otherwise missed. Quick side note, I’ve decided to start queuing you guys in on music that I think guys well with what’s happening in the scene (It’s mostly KS music). I’ll ty...

By the way. I'm looking for a proofreader for this fic. So if you're good at checking for grammar, spelling, and sentence errors. And you would like to help me then please send me a PM.

Looks like Kenji necroed this thread (Get the joke?). Anyway I guess I mine as well say that this fic was one of the reasons I started writing my own fics, so thanks mirage for the awesome fic. It's also inspiring a project of mine that will soon come to light. (Be afraid)

I personally liked it. It was a nice read, and I also think that Yuuko would be the type to over think things.