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Damn you crane! ok, i have some things to say, the Gangam style refrence was stupid considering KS takes place in 2007, and Psy's hit is from 2012. “HIIIIIICCHAAAAAAANNNN~!” Misha runs to our location. The downtown crowd gazes at us rather expectantly, like they were waiting for us to start a flash ...

much better, kinda want to see an Iwanako fan route, are you going to make a sequel to that?

Now I get it
You see, where I come from the "bending" is tranalated diffrently, so I didnt realize what you were talking about

I don't get it

i agree

didn't he say in the end that he didn't woke up anymore?

the fact that iwanako knew exactly what to say to him was weired because you didn't really put any effort for a complex conflict.
anyway, i am not really good at writing fanfics (at least in english) so my critisism is not very deep.

I was going to comment about insanity, but then misha happend.

Misha would look good in red

this is the second Iwanako fanfic written today, what a coincidence OR IS IT?!
for a first fanfic it is quite good, not amazing, but a good start, it just seemed a bit unnatural in some points.
welcome to the forum, i will be keeping an eye for future fanfics from you

I have a weired idea about what happend to hisao during his Coma.
well, the first chapter is nuch better then the proluge, short, but good.

Not sure what to think, it is really short but interesting, is this going to fOllow iwanako?

so this is a prequel to your other series, nice.
anyway, this is an intresting concept, and i will definetly follow to see how it comes out.

2017 is a special year

well thats intresting to say the least

Ah Wikipedia, the world's number one source for biased inaccurate information.
Now I know about another Japanese holiday

Just read the whole thing, preety good, will be looking forward for
Next addition.