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by Muphrid
Sun Jan 13, 2013 11:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)(complete)
Replies: 113
Views: 97257

Re: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)

All parts have been written. The only constraint is how fast I can edit them. There are five or six parts left to edit and post (depending on how I split them).
by Muphrid
Sat Jan 12, 2013 5:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)(complete)
Replies: 113
Views: 97257

Re: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)

Yeah, what I had imagined was that Sumi went looking for Hisao and found out he blew something up and that's why he might not be around. And then because he was asleep, she wasn't able to reach him, so she thought he was avoiding her calls and asked Mutou to talk to him instead. I'm considering the ...
by Muphrid
Fri Jan 11, 2013 7:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)(complete)
Replies: 113
Views: 97257

Re: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)

I don't sleep well that night; Sumi makes it known through Mitsuru that we should get takeout again, to avoid a stressful situation. Breakfast the next morning is similarly divided, so it's just Mitsuru and me hanging out in our room. I feel like a zombie going through the motions as I prepare the r...
by Muphrid
Tue Jan 08, 2013 2:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)(complete)
Replies: 113
Views: 97257

Re: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)

Ever since my heart attack, I've used books to take me places, to pass the time, to find a diversion from the stresses of life. Books may be the only way to go to the stars faster than the speed of light, at least in our lifetime, so I'm very fond of them. Since meeting Rin, I've taken to drawing so...
by Muphrid
Sun Jan 06, 2013 2:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)(complete)
Replies: 113
Views: 97257

Re: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)

Damn I hate it when Hisao shows how dense he can be. She was positively giddy and he pissed all over it. You've definately captured the frustration of her route perfectly. Frustration for us and frustration for Hisao, too. I'm rather curious what people think Hisao should've done differently here, ...
by Muphrid
Sat Jan 05, 2013 1:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)(complete)
Replies: 113
Views: 97257

Re: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)

Distress Chapter Three "So, when do I get to meet your girlfriend?" I look up from a diagram of a conducting plate and a point charge. Sumi's brow is creased as she stares at her own notebooks, but that's only because she thinks looking away from me will help her keep a straight face. It ...
by Muphrid
Mon Dec 31, 2012 12:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)(complete)
Replies: 113
Views: 97257

Re: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)

Glad you're enjoying it so far; I know Rin can be an acquired taste, so I'm very glad the story so far has that appeal. As far as the storyline with Sumi and Ryou, there was something there that I had strongly considered...until it came time to write it. I was going to have Hisao try to talk to Ryou...
by Muphrid
Mon Dec 31, 2012 3:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)(complete)
Replies: 113
Views: 97257

Re: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)

Joy, spelling errors in the title; that's embarrassing.

I did end up accidentally overwriting the first zombie reference that would've made Rin's remark make sense. Should be fixed now.

Thanks!
by Muphrid
Sun Dec 30, 2012 1:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)(complete)
Replies: 113
Views: 97257

Re: Direction (post Rin neutal ending)

Professor Adachi locks up her studio, and I follow her back to her office. Though I have a good bit of time before my next class, it does take fifteen minutes to get back to Toudai, and I'm mindful of that. But to my relief, Rin is here. With a bag strung around her shoulder and neck, she fumbles wi...
by Muphrid
Tue Dec 25, 2012 1:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)(complete)
Replies: 113
Views: 97257

Re: Direction (post Rin neutal ending)

I have no real idea what I would say to Ryou on Sumi's behalf, though. I take all the next day to think about it, only to go to dinner and find everything seems to be back to normal. Mitsuru brags about taking out three enemies with one shot of a rocket launcher in an online game, only for Ryou to p...
by Muphrid
Mon Dec 24, 2012 2:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)(complete)
Replies: 113
Views: 97257

Re: Direction (post Rin neutal ending)

Well, that's an interesting dichotomy. Hisao and Rin are struggling to reconnect after a long separation, and now we see a couple whose decision not to separate temporarily is driving them apart. A lot of potential here. Interesting; this was not an angle that I'd thought of, but it does fit quite ...
by Muphrid
Sun Dec 23, 2012 11:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)(complete)
Replies: 113
Views: 97257

Re: Direction (post Rin neutal ending)

As the day wears on, something stays with me from lunch with Rin. Why did she ask me about my relationships in Kyoto? I mean, I guess it was related, but it really wasn't. And she didn't have to tell me about her last boyfriend, either. Was that just reciprocation? I can't be sure. Rin doesn't tend ...
by Muphrid
Thu Dec 20, 2012 1:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)(complete)
Replies: 113
Views: 97257

Re: Direction (post Rin neutal ending)

I have more reason to get out of Professor Tanaka's lab than just fear of being locked up with pumps and lasers and other devices that could be hazardous to my health, though. (And if you think that's a joke, it's not. Our EM professor told a story about a student who found himself driving a shorter...
by Muphrid
Tue Dec 18, 2012 2:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)(complete)
Replies: 113
Views: 97257

Re: Direction (post Rin neutal ending)

Yeah, I think this is more a question of what is Hisao likely to think. Under the circumstances, I don't think he would assume the best case. Regardless of what Rin actually intended with the piece, Hisao has reason to be concerned. That's enough to make him offer, at the very least. Edit: I'm also ...
by Muphrid
Tue Dec 18, 2012 2:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)(complete)
Replies: 113
Views: 97257

Re: Direction (post Rin neutal ending)

Discovery Chapter Two It's been two weeks since I attended the exhibition. Things are settling down. I'm starting to find a rhythm with classes, but the workload is pretty heavy. Most of the professors give us two weeks to work through our assignments, though, so we're just winding down the first b...