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This fic has been a source of pleasure during a not so great year for me. Thank you Thanatos for seeing it to the end!

WHOO!! This is a great chapter. It was enjoyable to read how Jigoro and Akira interact and the growing romance is amazing!

Thanks for the update! I'm looking forward to reading it.

Hmm, Parity is a tricky one and I'm not sure it would work well in an orchestral setting anyways. Maybe a jazz combo?

There are some really nice moments in these! There was a low brass entrance with a chord in Three Stars that was really great, and I like the stylistic choices with Jitter.

I like it! It has a much more fuller sound, and I like the choices you made in giving solos to different instruments. There's a lot more meat to this tune so I think it lends itself better to an orchestra. I'm not sure if it's intentional, but it sounds like there's some extra crunchiness in the ...

Right, it's pretty iconic for the piece. I'm looking at it from an audience perspective listening to an orchestra. It wouldn't really be heard over the other instruments, and since this is an orchestration project it's cool to experiment and see what does work.

You're relying on the piano too much, especially in the bass parts. Try expanding it out more. Cellos can play the moving eighth pattern, low brass can be used to emphasize certain points and the melody can be pass more frequently between strings, woodwinds, and high brass I feel. The nice thing ...

Yeah I know I stuck a bit too much to the actual story, but in my defense it was only a mock up, and it was just a preview on how Misao will meet some of the characters I can't really change too much at that point however things WILL be different in terms of story and in some characters personality ...

I agree about the script format: Don't do it. Also, try not to lift all the dialogue verbatim from the story. I don't need to read a story where all that changes from the VN is the names and the pronouns. I can do that by rereading the VN and doing the substitutions in my head. If you just want to ...

It's all good dude. Things like work, friends, and college are important to take care. This summer I had to appeal for more financial aid since I've taken so many credit hours. Are you able to appeal for financial aid? Hope things take a turn for the better for you.

(I do appreciate the feedback, and certainly hope that I'm not scaring anyone off with my essays on why I'm right. I'll try to cut back if people feel it's distracting or otherwise detrimental to the story.) I think it helps us understand the what and why for your thoughts. Personally I don't mind ...

I was going to go for Hanako, but ended up going for Lilly instead.

Oooo, nice! I especially liked the interaction between Kenji and Miki. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Oh man, I got to the end of the chapter and I was leaning halfway off my chair with my face about half a foot from my screen. Great writing man!