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by colossus
Mon Feb 04, 2013 11:47 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 755349

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 2/2]

I called it with the blackout (so proud). The way it turned out was pretty good. Hisao always get's away with saying so little about his past and his feelings about it, it's nice that he finally opened up about himself, even if he opened up a little too much haha. The ending was super awkward. I ...
by colossus
Fri Jan 25, 2013 3:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 755349

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 1/24]

I have to say I really enjoy your story. It's funny, well written, and all of the characters feel natural. That being said, here's hoping for a power outage in the next chapter. After all, nothing helps bonding like a nice power outage in a bad storm. No matter what, i am positive the next chapter ...