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by SemisoftCheese
Thu Feb 07, 2013 12:21 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Birthday!
Replies: 927
Views: 396728

Re: Birthday!

happy birthday, lils
by SemisoftCheese
Wed Feb 06, 2013 9:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 4/3)
Replies: 67
Views: 43523

The Corellian Blood-Stripe

This bed is not mine. The blissfully sleeping form next to me is not mine. This teddy bear is not mine. Saki’s arms are wrapped around me in a death grip. They slacken. She’s noticed me waking. A brown haired figure pops up from the bed. Her brown eyes shine like rays of the ocean. Good morning, bea...
by SemisoftCheese
Wed Feb 06, 2013 9:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 4/3)
Replies: 67
Views: 43523

Re: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation

Also, another one with an overabundance of misplaced and arguably unnecessary similies and pop culture references. Ouch. I'll give it a better try next time, I'm still learning. Also: Another story with choice points... :( I tried to use the choice point here to illustrate the conflict lurking in H...
by SemisoftCheese
Wed Feb 06, 2013 1:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 4/3)
Replies: 67
Views: 43523

The Night Out

She pouts, sticks her tongue out at me. Wags a finger back and forth. Cute. “At least the French knew not to wear a black sweatervest at night, Hisao!” she exclaims mockingly. Then she grabs my coffee from my hands, and I’m forced to chase her around the store, slipping around the aisles as she danc...
by SemisoftCheese
Wed Feb 06, 2013 1:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 4/3)
Replies: 67
Views: 43523

The Night Out

I have a feeling Mutou has a secret identity as a super-hero. Or a second job at night. Or at least something to explain the incredible doziness he displays in class. And the crooked half-smile. Maybe he’s an ex-mobster on the down-low? That being said, he’s an excellent teacher. Just a really sleep...
by SemisoftCheese
Wed Feb 06, 2013 1:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 4/3)
Replies: 67
Views: 43523

Pride (In the Name of Love)

I step into the hallway of the main building. 7PM, and Hisao Nakai needs a can of instant coffee, and as luck would have it, there’s none left in the vending machine in my building. Could it have to do with a certain anarchist stockpiling supplies in his room for the eventual feminist triumph? It co...
by SemisoftCheese
Tue Feb 05, 2013 10:53 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4862
Views: 1523664

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

Shadowstalk wrote: I want to help people and be that friend that some people desperately need. I'll constantly browse here and give advice to those in need.
Word up, Shadowstalk. Good to hear you're owning your life and willing to expand to help others. No better way to live.
by SemisoftCheese
Tue Feb 05, 2013 11:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 4/3)
Replies: 67
Views: 43523

Re: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation

Nice writing so far. Thanks, Mirage. Also, because I'm curious: Is the sudden concentrated burst of Suzu a reference to Scissorlips' route by any chance? I'm seeing a few similarities. Both you and Mirage are correct here. I am a big fan of Scissorlips' route, but I wanted to put my own spin by mak...
by SemisoftCheese
Mon Feb 04, 2013 9:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 4/3)
Replies: 67
Views: 43523

ignore post pls
by SemisoftCheese
Mon Feb 04, 2013 9:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 4/3)
Replies: 67
Views: 43523

Levels

Saturdays at Yamaku are pretty lazy. That being said, I couldn’t really sleep last night. The drama between Saki and Misha kept replaying through my head. It wasn’t until rosy-fingered dawn crawled over the horizon that I finally went to sleep. I glance at the alarm clock besides me. 10AM. Four hour...
by SemisoftCheese
Mon Feb 04, 2013 9:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 4/3)
Replies: 67
Views: 43523

Numb

>Insist “Saki, how do you know Mutou’s brother!?” A brief flash of annoyance rolls over her face. Then her voice, as sweet and saccharine as ever, rolls out. “Darling, it’s nothing worth worrying about.” Then she pulls me sweetly in for a kiss, with lips so soft they could be pillows in Zeus’s bed. ...
by SemisoftCheese
Mon Feb 04, 2013 9:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 4/3)
Replies: 67
Views: 43523

skip this post
by SemisoftCheese
Mon Feb 04, 2013 9:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 4/3)
Replies: 67
Views: 43523

A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 4/3)

POWEREDIT: I decided to rewrite this because the first chapters of this sucked popsicles, so I'm going to be rewriting the first two acts I produced. For now, this means correcting clumsy prose and plot elements while retaining the general structure of the route as a whole. I'll probably re-edit th...
by SemisoftCheese
Thu Jan 31, 2013 10:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route
Replies: 153
Views: 112725

Re: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route

So I was hanging out in KS Generals, and the question of whether any other writers can pick this up came up. The answer is yes. Anyone who has the inclination to do so can pick up from where I left off. If you've got the time and energy I don't, then go for it and more power to you. Feel free to us...
by SemisoftCheese
Wed Jan 30, 2013 6:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route
Replies: 153
Views: 112725

Re: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route

“But Miki-chaan… this meeting isn’t sanctioned by the Student Council!” Misha ends on a point, gaining momentum like a snowball rolling down a hill. Shizune rolls her eyes. I think she’s used to this by now. Saki opens her mouth. Uh oh. I see a predatory glint in her eyes. The kind of glint that mak...