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I think there's a testament to Scissorlips's ability to get a reader into Suzu's mindset: every time I read a chapter from this story, I'm constantly feeling like I need a nap. I'm not sure if it's the intended effect, but it certainly helps me sympathize with her. Now that I consider it, this has t...

I TOLD YOU GUYS WE SHOULD HAVE GONE AFTER KENJI I TOLD YOU, BUT Y'ALL WOULDN'T LISTEN Joking aside, I like how it turned out, as far as neutral ends go (assuming that's what it was). Having the story basically come full circle, as YFA mentioned, was an interesting way of doing it. I'll admit, since ...

It might just be me, but I figured this was worth mentioning anyway--before we know the person Suzu is angsting over is her brother, he seemed to be described on borderline romantic terms. It was a bit of a startle to find out it was her brother. Again, might just be me, and if I need to start seei...

When she went blank after reading the school's name and address, I thought it was the same school where her parents had sent her for some kind of college prep and she fell asleep. I figured she was scared because she didn't want to go back and risk another complete failure. Finding out that she's sc...

[Go after him.] As much as I dislike Kenji, he's clearly lost it. Dude needs help. Badly. Even though Hisao is probably still mad at him (I would be too), I think he'll understand when he learns why Suzu didn't go straight to his room. Of course, if I were Suzu, I would just knock on Hisao's door, t...

To be honest, at this stage in the story, I would really appreciate feedback from as many readers as possible I registered just so I could provide some comments on your fic after reading that. I've been following this thread for the past couple of weeks, and I've been very impressed with it. Defini...