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by LordDarknus
Mon Sep 02, 2013 12:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Non, Je ne regrette rien
Replies: 8
Views: 6029

Re: Non, Je ne regrette rien

this fic somehow puts Alesana's Curse of the Virgin Canvas in my head -_-.. http://i1.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/226/409/RnFeE.jpg Also, that song... reminds me of Bionicle... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XMlswBYJXAY http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C01iqByRvLs&list=PL8387BFF490CC67...
by LordDarknus
Sun Sep 01, 2013 5:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 435198

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 7/19/2

EDIT: sorry I'm an idiot. :| So, my question is: how important is the shock of the first chapter to a reader's enjoyment of the fic? As the writer, I don't personally know this. When I wrote it a year ago, it was just a proof-of-concept, so the stinger was fairly important, but now this is becoming ...
by LordDarknus
Sun Sep 01, 2013 5:08 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Non, Je ne regrette rien
Replies: 8
Views: 6029

Re: Non, Je ne regrette rien

By the way, forgot to mention that the book Hanako is reading in the library? You know, the first picture up there? Yeah, that one. It looks like "Sword Art Online", and there's a number '01' on it. Not sure if it's actually "Sword Art Online" novel/manga thing, since it actually...
by LordDarknus
Sat Aug 31, 2013 4:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Non, Je ne regrette rien
Replies: 8
Views: 6029

Re: Non, Je ne regrette rien

Well, that was surprisingly... normal by your standards... Considering the topic the characters are also surprisingly in character. Nicely done! Oh, and nice pictures, too. Did you make them yourself? Nice story. I really like how you linked the pictures together. :D @Mirage I posted those pictures...
by LordDarknus
Mon Aug 26, 2013 10:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Non, Je ne regrette rien
Replies: 8
Views: 6029

Re: Non, Je ne regrette rien

I-I don't want him to go to jail or lose his future, n-not when it was only an- an- an ac-accident, and, H-Hisao... Is it un-f-fair to Hisao? Kenji didn't.. he wasn't... M-My boyfriend is innocent. It was an accident. I make myself accept that fact, and... swallow the taste of rust and guilt suffoca...
by LordDarknus
Mon Aug 26, 2013 10:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Non, Je ne regrette rien
Replies: 8
Views: 6029

Re: Non, Je ne regrette rien

A brush of warm summer wind flows by, whispering soothing comfort and quiet ease, as we share our last afternoon together upon the garden bench. Sadness runs its icy waters between us, an air of cold silence walls up and stops all our words, locking my every yearning thought in my heart. I have been...
by LordDarknus
Mon Aug 26, 2013 10:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Non, Je ne regrette rien
Replies: 8
Views: 6029

Non, Je ne regrette rien

I run my shaking hands through my scarf furiously, feeling sharp pain in fingernails and skin brushing fast against thick wool, before nervously adjusting my glasses instead. Hurrying myself down the empty aisles of bookshelves, my vision darts wildly trying to find her. This is where she usually hi...
by LordDarknus
Thu Aug 15, 2013 1:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: K-Shounen!
Replies: 294
Views: 76816

Re: K-Shounen!

Having walked through the lonely school Hearing whispers of memories relived so true I stand at the black iron gates Looking at the curious crest plate Smiling and wondering upon a wish... And.. why Rika named me after a fish I'll have to ask her that sometime.. But for now... I think it's time. Han...
by LordDarknus
Thu Aug 15, 2013 1:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: K-Shounen!
Replies: 294
Views: 76816

Re: K-Shounen!

“K-Kaori... what.. what did Hanzou ask?”

“....., he asked if.. he could give his heart to you.”
by LordDarknus
Thu Aug 15, 2013 1:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: K-Shounen!
Replies: 294
Views: 76816

Re: K-Shounen!

Beating him and knocking off his mask, Lionel and Rai warned him not to do something so stupid, begging him to change his mind.

But he wouldn't...

He just held his sister's hand... pressed her fingers to his bare face... and asked to just... 'trust him'.
by LordDarknus
Thu Aug 15, 2013 1:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: K-Shounen!
Replies: 294
Views: 76816

Re: K-Shounen!

Lying deep in coma, his sister had to undergo surgery to save her life, even if there was.. even if her dying heart would still give out, with or without a pacemaker. Knowing that it was the end, knowing we would never see her again, he held her hand tightly, with Rai, the School Doctor, Hinata and ...
by LordDarknus
Thu Aug 15, 2013 1:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: K-Shounen!
Replies: 294
Views: 76816

Re: K-Shounen!

If only you could.. if only...

Something terrible happened, he...

There was an accident, and... and the boy knocked her in the heart..
by LordDarknus
Thu Aug 15, 2013 1:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: K-Shounen!
Replies: 294
Views: 76816

Re: K-Shounen!

Through a long journey... through healing and caring, he found himself a new family... our family.. of friends... electing himself as dedicated President of the student council, he did everything in his power to make sure no one was alone or suffering, while constantly pushing others like Rai to do ...
by LordDarknus
Thu Aug 15, 2013 1:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: K-Shounen!
Replies: 294
Views: 76816

Re: K-Shounen!

By the time fate and chance brought his aunt to him again, the little boy had grown into a complete monster. She took him away, from the school and orphanage, and he thought he would be thrown into an asylum or beaten and locked away. Born to be forgotten and left to rot. She surprised him when she ...
by LordDarknus
Thu Aug 15, 2013 1:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: K-Shounen!
Replies: 294
Views: 76816

Re: K-Shounen!

Blamed for that, blamed by her parents and all his teachers and fellow students, he entered middle school shunned and hated. The teachers looked away when he was beaten for no reason, when the girls suggested all kinds of things that could provoke his asthma and kill him. Mental and physical abuse t...