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- Mon Sep 08, 2014 5:43 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
- Replies: 378
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Re: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
That's lovely. And it's finally done. And I will indeed read it at leisure again. Thanks! You're welcome, happy to see you enjoyed it :D Any attempt at conversation will no doubt be doomed to failure, to stuttering and awkward silences worse than the one we'd be trying to fill. But the silence now ...
- Mon Aug 18, 2014 2:50 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
- Replies: 378
- Views: 198455
Re: Hanako's Story (COMPLETE 18/08/2014)
It's time now, then, for what everyone's been waiting for... the final chapter of Hanako's Story! I would like to both apologise and thank everyone for this - an apology for taking so long to finish, and for such a wait between this and my previous update, and a thank you to everyone who's read ...
- Tue Aug 05, 2014 1:25 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
- Replies: 378
- Views: 198455
Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 20/06/2014)
I know there's been nothing new posted here for over a month, but I am working now on the final chapter, so an update will be forthcoming! Story isn't dead yet, though it would be a cruel irony if I made it all the way to the end then did a George RR Martin on everyone at the very last step...
- Tue Jul 01, 2014 6:18 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
- Replies: 378
- Views: 198455
Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 20/06/2014)
For once, I've avoided replying to each message individually, but it's nice to see a chapter instilling a reasonable debate into the comments now that the revised chapter is (at least a bit) better than the original version I uploaded. End of the day, everyone has different opinions on the scene ...
- Fri Jun 20, 2014 6:50 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
- Replies: 378
- Views: 198455
Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 10/05/2014)
Okay, I've edited this now with the updated version. Most of the pre-sex section is unchanged, except for removing the more awkward bits (like the references to Misha/Miki), while I've tried to change the sex section to show the awkwardness nearer the start, and display more of how Hanako is ...
- Fri Jun 20, 2014 8:57 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
- Replies: 378
- Views: 198455
Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 10/05/2014)
I'll be honest, after posting I expected this. Three comments so far, two critical and one positive, and even as the author I find myself leaning more towards the critical comments (which I expect there'll probably be more of soon enough). When I get some time I plan to go right through this chapter ...
- Fri Jun 20, 2014 6:21 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
- Replies: 378
- Views: 198455
Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 20/06/2014)
I knew this chapter would be pretty polarising, and it was awkward as hell to write since I'm not great (read: experienced) at writing about intimate encounters like this. At any rate, I can always go back and edit bits when my internet connectivity is fully restored... a certain pink haired ...
- Fri Jun 20, 2014 5:20 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
- Replies: 378
- Views: 198455
Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 20/06/2014)
Right then, I'll admit that I didn't expect to write this so soon after my previous announcement, but I had a lot of time on my hands yesterday evening since seeing England do so poorly in their World Cup game basically meant I had no interest in watching us getting hammered. Seriously, we're ...
- Tue Jun 17, 2014 4:05 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
- Replies: 378
- Views: 198455
Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 10/05/2014)
If you have a cell phone, you may want to investigate putting PDANet on both it and your computer for in-a-pinch situations just such as this. Thanks for the suggestion! Unfortunately I'm not sure, looking at the site, if that works in the UK (where I am), and my phone's pretty old so it doesn't ...
- Mon Jun 16, 2014 4:31 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
- Replies: 378
- Views: 198455
Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 10/05/2014)
Hi all! Just a quick update as it's gone past the time that I normally get a new chapter uploaded, so I think I should let everyone know what's happening (and reassure everyone that I am still alive. Please ignore the maggot in my eye socket, that's completely unrelated.). I understand you may be ...
- Wed Jun 04, 2014 11:28 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
- Replies: 378
- Views: 198455
Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 10/05/2014)
My point precisely :) Also, not entirely sure why you're dreading the H-scene, but glad to see you look forward to it as well xD. Because it was awkward as hell. And I meant that it was true more for Lilly THAN Hanako, not and. While Hisao's fitness level isn't improved in Hanako's route, it doesn ...
- Wed May 21, 2014 6:26 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
- Replies: 378
- Views: 198455
Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 10/05/2014)
Hanako's voice is one of my voices of choice, and I'm always glad to see her developing at the hands of a skilled crafter. Thanks for the latest update! Not really sure if I'm THAT skilled, but thanks all the same :) What a fantastic surprise to come home to today! Excellent work, as always Trivun ...
- Sat May 10, 2014 12:42 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
- Replies: 378
- Views: 198455
Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 03/04/2014)
Thank you my friend! Always good to see a satisfied readersanduba wrote:I realised I haven't read this chapter yet.
Good work, as always
- Sat May 10, 2014 12:42 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
- Replies: 378
- Views: 198455
Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 10/05/2014)
This one's a bit longer than my recent chapters, about four times as long in fact, so I'm fairly glad it didn't take me four times as long to upload! Act 4 – Chapter Five, Third Branch: Lost in the City of Angels Even I'm not entirely sure why I'm in the city. I suppose it was the need for a break, ...
- Tue May 06, 2014 12:25 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
- Replies: 378
- Views: 198455
Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 03/04/2014)
I've been meaning to reply to the comments for ages now and only just gotten around to it - damn 5000 word essay getting in the way of stuff... apologies all, and in addition, an update will be forthcoming :D Good update! I agree with Atario (what a surprise), in that this feels appropriate - and it ...