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All right, I made those adjustments for the most part, I'm going to look over the last four scenes again to see if I can catch more of those tense jumping problems.

Scene 14 felt almost exactly the same as in the VN - only with two Hisaos instead of one.

It was a choice I had some trouble with ...

brythain wrote: To which her immediate response was, "Iwanako home right now."

This is absolutely the best thing i've seen today.

Steinherz wrote:

Zykes wrote:I dunno if it's just shadowing or what not, but Lilly's bikini sure is transparent looking.

That's because it is :3

Dream do come true.

Scene 15 – Uncertain Gap

Today will be the first time I think I’ve ever gotten through that line for lunch so quickly. A little daring maneuver sliding down the last banister. Thank god none of the instructors saw me do that.

I chuckle at the thought as I finish up the last pieces of my meal ...

I dunno if it's just shadowing or what not, but Lilly's bikini sure is transparent looking.

Scene 14 – Desired Serenity

It has been a few days since Lilly left for Scotland. I can’t help but feel like the normal routines have all but disappeared. I guess everyone still hangs out and has lunch together like always, but it just doesn’t feel the same for some reason.

Class has been ...

Scene 13 – Developing Journey

Out of all the times to find myself in a huge scramble, it had to be now…

I suppose it can’t be helped, considering what’s happening. Lilly is finally leaving for her trip to Scotland. I know we had some time to prepare and plan for it, but I still feels like it’s ...

Scene 12 – Aching Recovery

A sensation of swaying envelops my body as all that I can see is blackness. However, ever so often I’m able to get a glimpse of something.

It’s a long hall way maybe? I am moving? Or am I just looking around?

My vision blacks out again, as the swaying intensifies ...

When approaching the steps for writing the story, did you feel comfortable with the ability you had, or did you feel you had to touch up on it with a guide book to help some of your weaker points or even take writing classes?

And in any case, would you suggest doing either of those things for ...

I guess Valve would rather not host cripple porn, eh? Shame.

Maybe, they do enjoy cat people porn apparently
~Cough~
Sakura Spirit

>.>
Well, technically, no humans involved. It's quite a hoot. In fact, a large number of hoots. Or a number of large hoots.

That is a story where the plot ...

Valjean Lafitte wrote: I guess Valve would rather not host cripple porn, eh? Shame.

Maybe, they do enjoy cat people porn apparently
~Cough~
Sakura Spirit

>.>

This is old, another thread on it from a year and half ago, read results there

http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=3&t=7291

After about 27 total Scenes over the course of two years (give or take a few weeks)

I think I'd like to have someone start double checking my work. And as much as I enjoy triple or quadruple checking my own work each time, I feel I do miss things or can only view things in a single point of view ...