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Chalk me up for the "use other characters as support" team. I'll also add that, since it's your story, does it really matter whether other character's flags are hit? You can decide what happens, 'flags' be damned.

Great work here, I really enjoyed reading this story! The writing was overall pretty sharp, and there were a lot of lines I really liked. It was also a really cool idea for a story--the characters are already seen by many as "different" or "disabled", but this story adds an extra...

Welcome to the forum! I'm always glad to see new writers, and it's awesome that this is going to be your first work. I'm excited to see it. As a first tip, I'm all for hearing you tell us about your story, but we'd much rather see it. Let your story speak for itself instead of just telling us about ...

Note: Sorry for the wall of text. Didn't think it would take a post this long to type that out :oops: As a personal taste, I really dislike crossovers for a lot of the reasons already given. A lot of the time, people rely too heavily on the appeal of taking two very popular and well known fandoms, m...

I second the caution against "unpublishing". The Washington Post article Silentcook posted was an interesting read, and a lot of that applies here, as well. The case involved in that article can be distinguished from posts here, as that article detailed a real life event that had actual ra...

Yeah, sorry about that =^.^=

I've been posting from my phone all day, and can't really write comments on a story without actually being at a keyboard. Have read, though, so expect a post about your story soon!

You're right, just re-read the post. It would be apathy if they realized it was uncomfortable and pushed forward anyway, and lack of empathy if they never made the realization that it was going too far. Just wasn't sure if the understanding bit was intentional or not. "Lack of apathy" woul...

Apathy is a complete lack of interest, and it really doesn't fit as used. I think the word you were looking for is 'empathy', which is the ability to understand and share the feelings of other people. You CAN be apathetic towards the feelings of others, but that strikes me more as understanding that...

Interesting view of Batman Mutou. I like it. Batman Mutou? My view on this Paragon of the classroom has been forever changed. I knew I liked the man. He's the teacher that Miki deserves, but not the one she needs right now. I hope Hisao can find a way to make these prodding's of others his own, or ...

A/N: Well, I sort of lied, but it was totally a white lie, so it's OK. Picked up a few spare hours, so I pumped the rest of my editing out before the weekend. I am making one major change--I'm dropping the "Act/route" deal for a few reasons. First, there are a lot of different definitions...

I'm about 95% to posting the next chapter. I'll see what I can do about getting it posted later tonight. If not, I won't have a chance again until at least Saturday, but it'll be out soon, I promise! Sorry to keep you waiting, and thanks for reading! =^_^=

I love Karaoke. I'm pretty decent, too, until about the fourth beer. Then it all goes to Hell. And you know what they say about Hell--it's painful, but it's where all the fun is. If you've never done drunken karaoke, and you're down for a few beers, I strongly recommend. Just plan on sounding worse ...

And even when sung ironically, it's still Goddamn hilarious.

Had to look it up, but It's Raining Men is in fact in A Flat Major. Solid find.

I can't comment on a whole lot of the technical details, since it isn't my field, and it's been a while since I've played Emi's route, so I don't remember the details of how long she was out, but keeping this contained to this particular story, aren't emotional outbursts upon waking a common side ef...